@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 THESE PEOPLE ARE CREEPS!!!! 😤 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
The woman turned on him in a heartbeat, a vicious smile on her face. She’s told him to stop…to let go.
But he couldn’t…
He just…couldn’t….
He cried harder, and it was almost as if no longer was it a stranger standing before him, but his own mother.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
ALSO! @elishavet-pidyon I think when Paxton first meets Esen, he’ll probably see the shadow or something and think it’s his brother’s….(she’s a very large bird correct??)
But once he realizes it’s not he’ll probably warm up to her.
And if Viktor is still with November, well Paxton will be happy to be back with his friend.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka XD! Ahh but poor Zlatan!! And Vulk be upseeeet (I am too Vulk…for Zlatan…)
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Nyx
“Only fools and madmen are fearless, lad.” Was Zlatan’s reply, his face looking so much like Grimm that Nyx couldn’t help the flare of annoyance in his chest.
He growled then huffed, the tips of his ears ti…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Btw, Zlatan isn’t angry, although it is difficult to tell the difference because he basically hides emotion. In this scene he’s actually showing his sense of humor.
Vulkasin
“Alright fearless leader, where to?”
Ah oh. Zlatan’s face had suddenly turned utterly devoid of emotion, the only…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon hey glad to see ya back! That’s cool about the preview thing!!
@freedomwriter76 anyone wanna RP?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Feather and Crosshair
Great, more bullies.
At least these didn’t have wings, which meant people were much less likely to get yeeted into a wall…..
Feather didn’t even have time to speak to the boy–Paxton–before they showed up. Sent the biggest boy sprawling on the floor.
The…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHHH!!!!! NOOOOO!!! I think the slap from Frida is what is gonna get to Paxton…. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
He let out a shriek as the first brother attacked, punching Leo, sending him to the floor.
The other went after Reuben, but Jakob stopped him.
It was all downhill from there…
The older bro…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h not entirely sure what else to make Paxton say.
Paxton
Leo stood tall. Strong, despite the evil look in his brothers’ eyes. In his mother’s gaze…
Paxton’s breath hitched.
Would he ever be that brave?
He perked up at Wolfgang who seemed…Frozen.
“W-Wolfgang…?” He whispered. No answer. Gent…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon hola!! I’m headed to a rally thing but wanted to see if anyone was on right now.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHH!! @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
Paxton
Reuben…Wolfgang…Leo…Jakob…Joshua…
They knew these people…
These…evil looking people…
Paxton gasped as he remembered what Wolfgang had told him before.
How they understood…understood what he’d been through….
Paxton’s eyes widened, fear gripping him. He looked up at Wolfgang,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHH!!! I have a feeling if they start beating up the bois Paxton might try to speak up “
*emphasis on try* my little shy guy…
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Feather didn’t get to respond before….
Yells..
Screams.
Begging.
Paxton’s blood ran cold.
Had his brothers come back? Found someone to torment?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
U think @elishavet-pidyon got kicked off again?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
hey y’all I’m changing a little something with Paxton’s appearance but it’s not noticeable so it shouldn’t really affect anything! But when I created his son (yes I’ve thought that far ahead XD) I realized I luv this idea way more then my originals so….
instead of just having small…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 awww ur poor charries!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h
Paxton
Reuben was smiling sweetly, comfortingly.
“It’s not your fault, Paxton. Not your fault at all.”
Warmth flutter through his heart and he smiled. A voice caught his attention and he jerked slightly, realizing whoever was speaking, was speaking to him.
It was t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Crosshair
“I’m sure you’re both glad you met.” said the boy–or really, the young man, not too much younger than Crosshair himself.
Feather happened to overhear. “Ha! He used to act like he didn’t care. Now his family takes up half his thoughts.”
Crosshair shot her a glare, although…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Paxton
Reuben didn’t seem okay…
But…maybe Paxton just didn’t know…
Paxton frowned, going quiet for a moment. He sucked in a breath, staring at his boots.
“I-I’m S-Sorry About m-my brothers…” Paxton started, voice slightly muffled by Hope’s fur against his face. “And…and m-my m-mother…”
Th…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oooh! Anything interesting in the book so far? @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
Paxton
The little boy glanced up at Reuben. The young man was running a hand through his dark hair, eyes shooting around the hallway.
Paxton watched with curiosity, thinking of how Ember often did the same to his own curls, usually with a hard…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 I’m on!
Crosshair
“Where are you from?” one of the boys asked. (how old are they? I know they have to be younger than he is, but….)
Should I tell him? He’s not going to believe me, Crosshair thought.
Although there was one part of his brain that remembered the previous time in…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka
Heyo! Anyone here?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Feather
She awoke with a groan. That winged creature had thrown her into the wall…..hard. What a bully!
“Is she all right?” came a couple of voices. Young voices.
“She’ll be fine.” replied Crosshair’s voice. She was glad the winged ruffians hadn’t hurt him too badly.
Feather…[Read more]
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