Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12

Aha! *subscribing*

A blurb would be good! Then of course a good intro to the Main Characters, because I really liked their aesthetics and want to know what they have to say for themselves.

@rae

*erupts from the shadows*

AH! I love them all!!!

Both of “Barons’s” works are exquisite. I really like the cat eye. Both have have so much character in them.

The kiddo is adorable! His little hands… just so precious.

Dante is incredible. I have only once done a cyclops-like thing, and it was in a “Pembric’s Creaturepedia” style so I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin

WHAT HAVE YOU TWO DONE?? XD

That’s just plain brilliance. Disastrous indeed, but brilliant nonetheless.

@whalekeeper  @loopylin

Welp. This has taken a while. I’m gonna do something though…

By the way, what does Brea look like again? She’s sounding a lot like Nadian, who has black curls, a dusky rose-olive complexion, and dark brown eyes. Basically a little girl version of Viktor but with their mother’s facial structure. Alyona favors their…[Read more]

Also….

Why would Onnendel be sending orcs to hunt his own band? And then give himself away by a notable device on his minions’ uniforms?

@ellette-giselle

What? XD Oh no. I’ll tweak that. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun.

Onnendel is not the traitor. It would be a great twist, but he’s too much of Aenwest’s cinnamon roll to have a negative arc..

Plus… Backstory. Lots of backstory….

They’ll talk more about that in the next two chapters.

@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested

The next chapter is up!

In Which Orcs Stink, and Dwogin Plays Hockey

Chapter 6

“Cowards and kettledrums!” Dwogin bellowed. His axe sprang into his hand and the stout warrior went charging into the first line of the ambushment. Orcs flew like flies over a hotly contested piece of garbage. I gagged.

In the chaos that ensued, I caught a glimpse of Onnendel and Tra…[Read more]

I guess I have a magic system, but it’s more a power system. In my KoS/Shattered Kingdoms series, there are unseen powers behind almost everything. Influences from the races of the Lighted and the Faded on the race of Blood. (Made the names up on the spot. XD) It’s pretty obviously allegorical, but I’m having fun developing it as if it’s not so I…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Absolutely welcome! I may have to struggle to finish something, but characters and random ideas are my cup of tea. 🙂

@koshka

TRASHGRIFFINS!!!

@koshka

OoooOOOoohHHHHhhhhh nnnNNNNOOOOooooo…….

Yep.

I do have a rough mythology as much as I want to have it. The god of war and his consort the goddess of prosperity run around doing their thing while the god of the yurt (home/tent) tries to just keep the tents from burning in the chaos. I have decided not to go too in depth, since I…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

EXACTLY. XD I even started a language simply so I could have it on signs in the illustrations. Like, no one speaks it in the story, but it’s there??? It did help me figure out the social hierarchy though, since I had all these neat names and no names to put them to.

HOWEVER. I am rather proud of the Dorwain’s pagan religion, as dark…[Read more]

And then what if… if theresafoodcalledshoemashandyoudon’tknowwhybutyoumadeitupanditsoundsdelicousandnowyouhavetothinkofareasonbecauseyourfamlythinksit’snastysoundingso-

It’s porridge, but the “everything but the kitchen sink kind” and is delicous.

And most of that you probably already knew, but there it is. You said “character arcs” and I got excited. XD Sorry.

@trailblazer

First off, that story sounds incredibly intriguing. Not your average story, and maybe one that you can use to deal with things most people deal with, but don’t talk about.

For developing character arcs, I would suggest you 1. Find a message, 2. Find a flaw that corresponds and fits the character uniquely 3. Determine what the…[Read more]

I talk about it to my siblings. XD And I keep an eye open for ideas. For instance, while at a funeral I realized I didn’t know my charrie’s traditional burials. Flash forward to when I ran across some archeology, and I decided to hunt for ideas. Now I have a detailed burial system depending on the place and/or culture in the world. Same thing…[Read more]

Well, I obviously took those with artificial light. XD At least they finally came through. Any thoughts? 😁