Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009

I’m just trying to be super careful that I’m still honoring God with my writing. And I’m also paranoid about my writing XD

I’d say so far you’ve hit the nail on the head.

@savannah_grace2009

But question– do you think it’s too dark?

Nope, not at all. I think I did worse in Against All Odds. (The one I’ve been posting snippets of in the Chat Chat) It’s good. I say keep it for sure! I mean, they did it in Wingfeather and no one complained about those books being too dark. Annnnd they did it in Green Ember, taking all…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh man, this is gonna get rough. Not much to say yet. Sorry!!! I’m more of a plot critic then format critic. I’m still waiting to see how this all plays out.

Thanks for reading this because it keeps me from slacking off when people are expecting new chapters XD

SAME!!! And btw, did I tag you on Let There Be Light’s…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thanks!! I’ll add that to my notes. Although, Turin isn’t really one for questions. Or talking. At all.

@theshadow

No problem!! Thank you for all the help you have given!

@grcr

Ok then. You asked for it!!

Jonathan’s eyes widened in terror and his face went white. He had expected imprisonment and perhaps more interrogations. His mind had already been working through all the escape tactics he knew of. Now, he stopped short. Death? The thought had never crossed his mind. It was in that moment that Jonathan…

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@theducktator

Sorry this took a minute! Here she is.

@elishavet-pidyon

Was competently blindsided. *picks slef up out of dirt and dusts off* “I feel like Calvin”

And as you love Peter Pevensie (from the BOOKS), and Smalden, draw beautifully, and like skirts, I feel an unavoidable obligation to join the welcoming team. So I shall have to make the most of it.

Aw, thank you! I’m so glad you like my…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Interesting plot turn! Looks like Sef and her mom are gonna have a forbidden child…… Interesting. I don’t have much to say yet. I would like to see how some of this starts panning out. I’m definitely intrigued enough to keep reading!

@keilah-h

Um no. Oh wait, I can’t say that ’cause it’s Monday. 🙁 lol.

Well, It’s Monday! I’m ready!!! Shoot!

@princesachronicle22 @hybridlore @grcr @koshka

Ok. Wow, I’m off for one day and the whole world tags me. You should see my inbox!!! lol. Ok, because I don’t want to go back and weed through who said what, I’m just tagging y’all who tagged me and replying to the world in general.

So, for the cover, it looks like I’ll be doing style seven.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I like number 7 best I think. The title feels like it is part of the picture.

Jonathan, you reckless, courageous, foolish kid. What did you think you were doing? (I think you’d get a long just fine with Vulkasin to the rest of the world’s danger)

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

@loopylin

AWESOME!! Thank you so much!

Could you Dominic?

He is 16 years old, slender, lighter skin tone, has black hair and dark eyes. He’s a guy ballet dancer. (I’ll attach a picture of the kind of outfit he’d wear.) He can be really funny and chipper, but also really quiet and serious. Depending on the situation. He is trying to escape from…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Looks like it might be seven!

Anyone else?

@highscribeofaetherium

Nice, that’s two votes for 7.

@loopylin

Howdy Loopy,

Are you still drawing characters, or are you taking a break?

@esther-c

Thanks! The feedback is super helpful!

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, that makes more sense. It just didn’t come across like that to me when I read it.

Maybe you could reword it, but yeah. I didn’t find the base concept cringe at all.

Yes, I would completely agree there.