Jaybird

@hybridlore

Yes, but not anyone that we know. yet

Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that,

So what are you meaning by this? (not that your’re wrong, just interested to see how these sections are coming across to the reader.)

@keilah-h

well, one thing, it made me decide I NEVER would want to ever play minecraft. That game would bore me out of my mind. XD

@highscribeofaetherium

Well, first off, I was really annoyed by the time I got to it. Just the whole minecraft stuff was driving me out of my mind. I felt like with that one he was relying more on the novelty of having his stick figures in a video game then his actual story.

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@highscribeofaetherium

yes….

@linus-smallprint

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@keilah-h

So not to take this over again, but I watched the animation vs. Minecraft

So…. why was I supposed to cry?

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@the_lost-journal

WHY IS IT SO RELATABLE!!!!!!

I feel like that last one is definitely how people come up to me after reading some of my stuff…..

@keilah-h

Sounds good.

@hybridlore

Eh…. it was a wild week. One I’m glad to have over. 😅

Thanks, glad you like them! Yes, Amber did do a good job with him, but she’s a peacemaker type.

You think I’m gonna kill someone! *is offended* XD

@theshadow

I’ll try to get to it!

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Sorry I’m a bit late today! I had a lot going on.

@keilah-h

Something you might also want to take in consideration is whether he is relaxed or has adrenaline pumping. If he is relaxed when he gets shot, he will bleed out faster. If he is high on adrenaline his contracted muscles will hamper the blood flow giving him more time.

@hybridlore

Haha, Evan is great.

I find it odd that the others blend. I would get that with Jason and Brian because they aren’t around as much, but I’m surprised Ron and Michael do.

Interesting.

@hybridlore

Now that you’ve seen a good bit of them, what do you think of the guys (and girl) on Jonathan’s team?

@hybridlore

I know.

But he is kind of being blind and self pitying. He does need to see that he’s not the only one who’s been hurt.

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@hybridlore

Yes, and yet they handle it so differently.

Be careful out there, fellow writers 👀😂

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@hybridlore

Yeah it’s pretty wild.

What makes you think he would sympathize a lot (not because your wrong, but out of curiosity)

@linus-smallprint

WOW!! That is awesome!!!