Jaybird

Thanks, all 🙂 Hoped it would help

@godlyfantasy12 Sure! I’ve got a scene with Bronwen and her best friend that I wrote back in January, I’ll try and find it.

@queen_of_alvastia

smh things we’ll never understand. XD

@queen_of_alvastia

Lol I thought my laptop was buggy

@queen_of_alvastia

OoOoooOooo As George Villiers famously wrote: “The plot thickens…”

mmmm, I see

Absolutely! Glad to help.

@freedomwriter76

AAAHHHHH Gwweeeeeennnn

lol when I first watched the Amazing Spider-Man 2 (the one where *cough* she *cough* dies) my oldest brother only told me one thing abt the movie, he told me that Gwen dies in the most terrible way possible. All through the movie, horrified eleven y/o little me was picturing a million gruesome things…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

OH YESYESYESYESYES Flacon and the Winter Soldier, beautiful. If it were a book, I’d’ve re-read it, bought it, put it on my shelf and joined the fandom. *lol the proper standard to judge a movie*

Yea, and The First Avenger’s vintage soundtrack and costumes *chef’s kiss* perfect.

Lol I’m not gonna get the Avengers theme out of my…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

*Franticly searches* Where’d Storm go!?

That was great! I love the body language, the tones, the pros, the emotion, it’s so pretttyyyy :DD

Is this a scene from a bigger WIP? Cuz the only thing I wanna say is lacking a little bit, is the relative placement context(not a technical term XD).
Like, can they see the afore…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia

As far as edits go, it was confusing which character you were speaking for as the POV switches around. Are you writing omniscient view?

@queen_of_alvastia

Is he okay?

IS HE?!

I need to knoooow!!!!!!

@queen_of_alvastia

*Quiet voice in corner*

What just happened?

@freedomwriter76

YESS

My older brother and I are such Spider-Man fans lol.

Rn him my little sister and I are going through all the Marvel movies in order, everything but most of the rated R movies(extremely stupid decision, yes we have sacrificed world communication for this). We’re almost at phase four, gotta work through the tv series tho. As…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

XD hullo there
Love your pfps btw (I could fangirl over Marvel for hours)

lol I have four siblings and my family practically adopted a toddler through babysitting for two years, so for a while I had five.

Oh my goodness how many times I would look up while eating or doing school and my younger sister was staring a death glare…[Read more]

@ava-blue

This is so clever 😀

@whalekeeper

“You will never sleep again;
though you will never stop dreaming.
The end can only follow the beginning.”

*embodiment of what I hope to write;-;*

@freedomwriter76

Yeesssss I love it so much!

lol writing prompt number sixty one perfect realistic sibling relationship XD

@lydia-s

THis is so cool!

For the minute I shall *poetry*
Break My Heart
Joy Harjo

There are always flowers,
Love cries, or blood.
Someone is always leaving
By exile, death, or heartbreak.
The heart is a fist.
It pockets prayer or holds rage.
It’s a timekeeper.
Music maker, or backstreet truth teller.
Baby, baby, baby
You can’t say wha…

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@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

@godlyfantasy12

Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, wonderful tension! The things authors love to create yet struggle to write.

It sounds good so far; the emotions seem balanced to me.

How would Ara respond to November being hurt? How did she want to respond to Riven?

At this point it looks like she’s about to explode, which could manifest itself in various ways depending…[Read more]

Oof, I see the issue. Lotsa tension right here lol

Great character, btw.

Is she alone with November, or is it November, her and Corvina?
(I love these names)

@godlyfantasy12

Yeessss I love these points in books

*I offer advice based on elementary observations and a house full of constantly injured and nursed daredevil little brothers*

ahem. *places spectacles precariously on nose tip*

Shall we?

For a non-magical injury, he may be concussed depending on how hard he hit his head. If this is in…[Read more]