Elishavet Elroi

@keilah-h

Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!

What do your brothers love so much about it?

I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I will. It’ll be a bit odd this time because I feel like I already asked most of them on LOS. I should have a few though.

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!! Linus saves the day. Why didn’t I think of that with Flavia? 🤦🏼‍♀️

Good. Good. I’m glad the time skip works.

The person was an acolyte of the priests who saw what happened.

Thank you for sharing your series with us! If I remember correctly, it was just about a year ago that you started posting the first book…

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@hybridlore

Okay, I only got one.

idk if you saw my email, but it won’t let me past your safety measures.

@hybridlore

Where are the links?

@keilah-h

Lolol. You’re welcome.

@hybridlore

Oh yay!! I was so sad when I went to comment and realized I couldn’t.

@hybridlore     @keilah-h

Lolololol.

Okay, well Joseph and Amelia ended up having nine kids. Mercy was the oldest of their children, with Beric being the oldest through adoption. (of that makes sense)

Beric and Quin designed a network of guys who went throughout Ardenta helping farmers recover land and people rebuild after the war. These g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

No. I can’t. Not without an account. 😥

Could you try using Microsoft? I have an account with them, and it’s not attached to google. It’s honestly safer, which is why I went with them. And You can set it up for free.

@hybridlore

*Crying because I can’t comment or see y’all’s comments*

Nooo, this is so sad.

😭

Oh well. I guess it can’t be helped.

@keilah-h

Well that’s good.

@hybridlore

Yeah, but he doesn’t know about them.

I do though.

if you be nice and say please…..

@hybridlore

yeah, if you let yourself you can see it coming from page 1 of their book. It was always there and always inevitable.

as for Rowan, I believe in Holy election, and because of that, this works. That’s more of a Calvinist view though. Basically, Rowan would have never believed no matter how much time he had, unless God called him. A…[Read more]

@keilah-h

yay!! I’m so glad.

@keilah-h

Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!

I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.

Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.

Or does that not work.

I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…

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@hybridlore

So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?

Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!

NEXT SECTION!

    Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…

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