Elishavet Elroi

*emerges from the dust and shadows*

Has the dance even happened yet?

Actually, I think there was a point in the drafting or planning stage that lowkey forgot Brandon existed 💀🤦🏻‍♀️🤣

@theducktator

Awww, thank you so much girl!!! 💖 I appreciate you taking the time to read through it all! <33

Do you have any additional feedback after having read the whole thing?

@savannah_grace2009

No that’s really helpful! Tysm!!

@grcr

Thanks!!! Let me know when you’re ready.

@whalekeeper

Ooooo! I love it! It makes me think of Barnes.

@keilah-h

100%

@keilah-h

Jim, lol. Thought I might as well get her to draw the whole main cast now that she’s started. I’d love some others if no one get’s wise to this, so keep it under wraps and then you and I can cycle through. ;09

@grcr

I don’t see anyone else in line…. so maybe I can have another after you are done with @keilah-h ??? Pretty please!!

Just one character this time. XD

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! Shall be looking forward to comments!

@linus-smallprint

try THAT.

https://1drv.ms/w/c/9ff685038eab87a7/ET6rrEZ5XvJHv-1rHGwycOMBuh5U4QkPLaT031-tmVn-qQ?e=1Dlg54

Sector 5 The Hidden.docx

Odd.

That wasn’t a link at all.

@linus-smallprint

Uh… hmm. Idk how to add people in….

I’ll try reposting the link and if you can’t get in then I guess I’ll try to figure something out…….

Sector 5 The Hidden.docx

Try that. You may need to sign in…..

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!! I literally had nothing to do for three days in the car. I read everything in the art section, everything in the general writing section. XD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok thank you!!

I was thinking there needed to be more family interaction too. I’m glad you caught that. Is there a certain spot on the book that you think those types of scenes would fit best? (If not, that’s fine)

Ok yes!! I will for sure do that! It will be fun for me to take time to flesh out the characters individually…[Read more]

@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️

Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.

Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

@whalekeeper

On here works great!

Also, any thoughts on the book cover?

@grcr

*Gaspeth!!!*

What have you done!!!

🤣

Well, there goes that. XD

@theducktator

don’t encourage me.