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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 4 hours ago
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Joseph curled up in his bed. He could hear the murmur of voices downstairs and knew that Noah and Darrien were holding one of their secret meetings with a few young men in the church. Sabina was in the other room, tucking in Asher and Eric. He could hear her gentle voice…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 5 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 5 hours ago
So cute!!!! I love it so much!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 17 hours ago
Yes! It does!
This is the Elf, right? The blind one?
Oh dear, I forgot his name. (or rather, I forgot how to spell his name.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 17 hours ago
You nailed the exact reasons why I like him! lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 17 hours ago
I didn’t mean to shoot down ideas. I’m very sorry. I thought you were being funny with this whole thing. I didn’t know that it was something that really mattered to you.
Would you please forgive me?
As for saying someone needed to kick you off, that was totally because that’s what people kept saying to me when I first got on…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 19 hours ago
Thank you! I like Julian too. Though it’s really funny that he’s the character that you like. lol.
May I ask why?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 19 hours ago
I LOVE THE aesthetic!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 19 hours ago
I… I don’t know what to say.
First off, I can hardly see what I’m doing because I’m crying so hard. I don’t understand why you seem to be so out to get me or…. or something! At first I thought you were just a very funny, joking type person. I was only trying to play along.
I called you “little buddy” because that’s what I…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
Good. That’s what I assumed was happening.
The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later.
I’m afraid I was more concerned over the emotional/psychological aspect, but I suppose that’s kinda what you meant.
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*Cackles*
Oh, and I wasn’t sad. I was almost angry. Slightly mad. Highly miffed. And rather sorry for…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
Oh I don’t think Sabina solved the long term problem either.
I think she is tired and stressed and just about at the braking point, and she doesn’t know what else to do beyond keeping the household from falling apart.
The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later. She was just trying to find some way to keep the peace for the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
It’s Eric, I’m guessing.
Hmmm, can you get him captured without Alan knowing about it? That seems like the easiest way out.
Other then that, you could get him rescued easily if….. idk….. Stripe comes and knocks the guy out while Alan distracts him. Or something of that sort. Eric would still feel really stupid and useless…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 20 hours ago
Well hey there little buddy. Tagging me several times in one post is not nice either, because then you spam the mess out of my email and it crashes.
So, don’t do that.
On a more serious note, I’m not sure if you’re joking or not about your family and about some of us not being Christians. Online chats are hard because you…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
*Glares*
You killed him. I’m more than mildly miffed at you.
*Huffs*
*Contemplates writing you into a short story just so I can heap vengeance with my pen*
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As to the last section…
This could just be a difference is my own temperament, upbringing, or understanding, but I’m not sure I agree with how Sabina handled the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 20 hours ago
Ah, Sabina’s idea. That has history.
Let’s just say, a long time ago, the last fight I had with my brother ended when mom duct taped our wrists together.
For the whole day.
We had to do school together, eat together, play together, do chores together. It was traumatic. lololololol. At least I had my right hand free, but i had to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 21 hours ago
I would have, and that’s what I have in mind, but I was limited to one word. 🤷♀️
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 22 hours ago
Yeah, I guess it really isn’t that long. It just took me two hours to edit because of the relationship dynamics. Those are such a pain sometimes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 22 hours ago
Yes Wyoh dear! We love you now! Please come eat the crazy potato!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 22 hours ago
Yeah, no kidding. You are making no sense at all.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 22 hours ago
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