Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009 😭😭😭

it’s so good, but…but…but…

😭😭😭

Sef and Riker each need to be rescued fr 😭💖

@savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 Thank y’all very much💖💖🥰

@koshka @esther-c Thank y’all so much for the ideas!! <3

Koshka, I really like your idea of Riker meeting someone much like him, and I know who I’m going to do😏

also, does anyone else just get so infuriated by some characters even if one or two are just so minor…[Read more]

Funnn

*subscribed*

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I love it!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… maybe you could bring Riker to a point where he starts playing what-if scenarios in his head. Like “What if God does really love me?” “What if I can actually be forgiven?” Etc. to where he eventually starts believing it. I’m sure he’ll fight it at first, but then he just finally…[Read more]

@beth-torres

(I’m finally getting back to you within a few days!! 😱😂)

Ok, awesome!

Hallie

Hallie blinked a few times, the awkwardness of the moment sinking in. Her cheeks burned as she took a step back. “Oh, I guess… Well… um, thanks?” She forced a chuckle. Top hat? She mentally scrambled for something else to say, but nothing came to mind.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh my goodness the poor darlings 😭😭😭 I need to see them happy and healed soon 😭

I loved Leon’s confrontation scene. *hugs him* And Isaiah is so sweet 💖

And Riker 😭😭😭😭😭  *hugs him too*

@freed_and_redeemed

Hmm… stubborn characters can be troublesome.

Here are me thoughts. Use such as are helpful, discard such as aren’t.

• He already can’t live with his guilt/shame/hopelessness. That is quite obvious. He just needs to realize what is already clear to everyone else including the reader.
• Due to the very fact that he hasn’t…

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@esther-c @koshka @rae Thank y’all so much for reading and being so kind! 🥰🥰 Oh, and *offers tissues to all*…there we go XD

Honestly, rn the only one who is a struggle is Riker.

I know where Leon’s story is going…I know how Leon will finally come back to God…I know how he will come to the end of himself…

but Riker is another…[Read more]

@stephie

Sooo… I feel really bad because I never was able to read the book 🫣 I really wanted to I just totally forgot/didn’t get the time!! 😭

I have a basic idea of what the book’s about though, so I’m looking forward to reading y’all’s discussions!

@freed_and_redeemed

Hurry up and get to the end when they’re all redeemed alreadyyy!! 😩

Jk jk 😂😂

Great job though, girlie! I loved reading some of your writing again!

@savannah_grace2009

(Sorry it took me forever to get to this!! 😭)

Ooh, I love it!! I really like how you changed it!

@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you so much for the update, the poor dears. They need some help. And maybe some tea and cookies.

So…I have some feedback for Riker’s scene. I am supposing this is nearing the crisis point of the second book, as Riker is getting a broken record sensation with his guilt. Otherwise…ooof. That was a hard scene.

Also, I…[Read more]

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @rae @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD

Anyone want a Leon/Riker update??👀

welp, you’re getting one anyways XD

TRIGGER WARNING: GUILT/SHAME. MENTIONS OF SIN. ALCOHOL. BAR FIGHT. BLOOD. 

(but…[Read more]

If someone ever makes their tag line something like @everyone-else or @anyone-who-reads-this I already pity them.

@elishavet-pidyon

They got us alright.

(Also, @AllOtherKeepers Hi y’all! I’m haven’t croaked yet, praise the Lord.)

@whalekeeper

Oooohh, this is a fun idea…

Lemme think of some songs

Ok.

Character

Song 1– “This is my Choice” by Alan Silvestri

Song 2– “Tessa” by Steve Jablonsky

Song 3– “The Real Hero” by Alan Silvestri

(i might do more later, but idk yet. Instrumental is hard 😂)

I am not a fan of AI, and I don’t personally think it can ever do what a human can when it comes to art or writing.

Why?

Because art and writing done by humans has passion…voice…love…intertwined. You can tell it was done by a human being with emotions, fears, passions, loves, etc.

You just can’t nor should replicate that with…[Read more]