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Ok, I’ve been playing around with the front cover to The Space Between Us. What…[Read more]

Here is the next section y’all!

Turin did not return for many hours, but Aaron did not feel alone. In fact, he felt more comfort then when he was with Turin, for now he was alone with God. Aaron liked being alone, able to speak aloud freely to his Father in heaven. After the events of the passed few days, he felt a desperate need to clear…

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@highscribeofaetherium @rae @jonas @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow @princesachronicle22 @whalekeeper @stephie @grcr @esther-c @theloonyone @ava-blue @hybridlore @keilah-h @koshka @livingwoodchronicles @freed_and_redeemed

Jonathan just got himself into a bad situation if anyone is…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It was really good! I don’t think I have any comments on that one!

As for what @keilah-h has been saying, I can’t say that I agree. Stuff like that happens, and Like I said before it was not graphically mentioned and it has a purpose. As for age ratings….. ugh, that stuff is so stupid now. It’s been so twisted and more…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

Thank you! Yeah I would love help doing a good back blurb. Do you have any ideas or info you need?

@keilah-h

Yes, I do!! You have to order from my company through mail. I have a link to the order forms if you would like me to send you one. So far I have not put it on Amazon yet, though that’s going to be one of the next…[Read more]

@theducktator

No, not a practice tutu, unless she was rehearsing a performance. It would be a satin-like wrap skirt.

@theducktator

Ugh, my reply didn’t load. grrrrrr,

I was wondering if I could give Crystal a skirt with her tights? like a ballet one. (professionals use them. My mom was a professional dancer and an owner of a dance company, and I’ve done ballet a few years myself) anyhow, I dislike outlining girl’s legs like that, and would really prefer…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I think I should have written stuff that should be rated higher then a PG13 if it was a movie. lol. (Violence level anyways.) I think it really matters why you’re writing it and what is the goal and the message and the point. ya know. And also how graphic it is. as it was, Sara’s chapter was not graphic at all.

@linus-smallprint

Lol, does this help.

Ardentan Royal Guard

It’s medieval. Very medieval.

I’ll post some more tomorrow! Thanks for the feedback, I love it!

@freed_and_redeemed

I love the pinterest page!! Great job!

OK, you guys had GREAT feedback! This is just what I needed.

Ok, the blurb on the back…… I am HORRIBLE AT WRITING THOSE!!! I can NEVER EVER write a good one! I hate it when they spoil the story, but I also want them to sound interesting. If anyone is good at writing…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay!! I love it!!

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @koshka @grcr @theducktator @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol

I (finally) made a Pinterest account! Even if y’all don’t have Pinterest, you can check it out here(just delete the space after the h; I know KP doesn’t like links, so😂):

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@ellette-giselle

So pretty!! I love the soft shimmery feel of your cover.

My only critique on the cover is that the words feel a little crowded and off balance, like they were shoved into the top of the picture. I might move your name to the bottom of the page, enlarge the words, and drop them down a little bit. Maybe even flip one or both of…[Read more]

*considers what characters I should have drawn next…*

@ellette-giselle

I’ll try my best to read through your WIP, but I can’t make any promises since I’m also helping two other people with their stories. (:

@hybridlore

It sounds really cool! Are you looking for format critiques, or is it too late for that?

I’ll take an critiques you have. (I just may not use them if I don’t agree. lol.) But yeah, critique away! That’s why I showed y’all!

@ellette-giselle

That is so cool!!

@esther-c

Yes! I overlaid a pen drawing onto a water color background, tweaked a few things with the design program, and there it is! I designed the publishing logo as well!