Jaybird

Oh my goodness, this is great. I have one.

You know your a writer when…………  you have been doing bad things to your favorite character. Then, at Bible study they ask if anyone has a prayer request and you get ready to raise your hand with “Yes, I have a really good friend who is going through a really hard time.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Ok, here is the next part!

“Aaron, Aaron wake up!”

Aaron opened his eyes and blinked in the sunlight. Turin was standing by his bed. Aaron sat up in confusion. He couldn’t remember having gone to bed. “Where are we?”

“In the tavern. You fell asleep yesterday afternoon. It’s now nearly supper…

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*sobbing* He looks WAY to old!!! I loke MURDERED him in that drawing.

Why did I post it?

Can I unpost!!!!!??????

ack! He’s horrid!

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Ok, here is Turin. I am seriously cringing right now. Ugh. I HAVE to redo him.

@linus-smallprint

I’m just basically looking for structure edits right now. This is my 4th draft, and after I go though this I’ll pass it on to my grammar/formatting editor and then move forward into getting it published. so, basically trying to make sure the story is solid, the characters are 3D, and the plot line is interesting and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

so sorry, I had to find her.

This is from three years ago, so it’s not very good. i should really redo her.

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow

Anyone, (specifically Sara because this is her favorite.) Want to see a drawing of Sabina?

Anyone interested in reviving this topic?? I can put together a list of prompts for August if anyone else is interested… 👀

@whalekeeper

Wow, that’s a hard question. Ermm…

I think I’d immediately start thinking of a way to keep them here longer. Is there a way that they don’t have to die? It might take me a little bit to come to terms with the fact that there’s not. Honestly, at that point, I think I’d start trying to spend as much time with them as I can and make as…[Read more]

@keilah-h

well, I got this one. Hmm, yeah, technology always has something wrong with it.

@savannah_grace2009

You are so welcome! Write fast my dear!!! (Otherwise I will hunt you down…..)

@savannah_grace2009

I’m so glad i could be of help! I cannot wait to read this!!!

savannah_grace2009

Oh my goodness. when I read that one line…. it was like someone stabbed me. Oh, this is gonna be sooooo good! I cannot wait to read it!

Ah, so, plot twist, it’s Elroy who gets the redemption!!! I’m really liking this.

@savannah_grace2009

Um. That was a 180.

@savannah_grace2009

NO NOBODY IS DYING!!!!! WHAT IS IT WITH YOU AND DEATH?!?!

Oh what? Man. Fine.

It’s not that I want it to be sad, (sad is great in it’s place though) But Christian death scenes can be so beautiful though. Especially when dying for another, and/or as a tie-off to a redemption story.

@savannah_grace2009

Like Jonas said, this isn’t a direct correlation. Pythonos do, in fact, represent evil people AND demons. No person is irredemable, as I said earlier in this post. God can save anyone!

Ok, I was just thinking that you were saying they are unredeemable. If that’s not the case then no worries. Sorry if it seemed like i was c…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, I could agree with that. The people do need to be redeemable though.

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks @jonas

Yeah, I think we just hit the major plot-hole. I think you need something between Pythonos and people. You see, even the most depraved of people do not become demons. They can certainly become demon possessed, but they themselves will not become demons. And Christ has the power to cast out demons. (I can find…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Fine. But sometimes the good characters gotta die.

But there’s a problem there. When we chose to live in sin, or even directly comit evil, there is still hope for us until death. Even the vilest of sinner can be redeemed by the blood of Christ. If you make Pythonos unredeemable, you are almost saying that the blood of…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Lol….. we’ll just have to see.