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freedom posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
@rae @savannah_grace2009 Would y’all believe me if I told y’all Riker was going to be the villain in the original idea for Freedom’s Fire? 😂
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freedom replied to the topic A New Beginning: A Marvel Fanfiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @rae
5 months later, and I have 2 more chapters of this fanfic to share😅😂 With Broken Shackles being the priority, I haven’t worked on fanfics in a while, BUT with Broken Shackles currently pretty much on pause, working on this has also been fun.
So, I present Chapter 6 and 7 of this Fanfiction
c h a p t e r …[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
@keilah-h Totally understand. I am working on a fanfic rn though👀
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
This chat is so quiet😅💀
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
*crying* “my poor unloved character!!!!” (just joking!!!)
OK, I’ll take a look. Thanks!
btw, if all you want is to see Aaron cry, you’ll get your wish soon enough. hahaha
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Is Aaron really bland? I thought he had a lot of character…….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 1 month ago
Well then linus and I will be partners in crime. No ships for us.
Catch us if you can…… (you have to find us first. lol and seeing as no one knows where anyone lives on here, that’ll be fun! hahaha)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 1 month ago
I didn’t, and the “playlist police” didn’t arrest me. lolololol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Aw, that’s sweet of you!! I bet she’ll love it!
No problem! Get to it whenever you can.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 1 month ago
You don’t have to do a “ship”
I didn’t for Against All Odds. I just skipped it. If you want some ideas, you can try listening to Sarah and my playlists.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009
sorry this took a minute! KP ate it and I only now just realized that it didn’t send. 🙁
The days passed, and Turin, Noah, Aaron, Darrien and the others continued to tell all they met of Christ’s love and sacrifice. Many did not want to listen, saying there was too much going on to consider such things. T…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
I’m 21. The other guy is 20.
NO WONDER!! I’ve been thinking “how is he so good with his critiques!!”
Oh yes, and what Linus said about Aaron goofing off and doing the handstand on the border is what I mean about showing a LITTLE immaturity. If you make him a little…idk, funnier and give his personality mor…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
There is one who Aaron kind of reminds me of who is a year younger than me, being 20 years old
Wait, you’re twenty? Or did I just completely misunderstand that.
Unless I missed something, this side of his personality has kind of disappeared since he met Turin.
I certainly will keep that in mind. I feel like none of the situations…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
Hey, I don’t know if you saw my question, but Have you seen the movie Jojo Rabbit? I was watching it again last week and I kept thinking of you the whole time. lol.
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@ellette-giselle I have not. From the trailers I’ve seen, I just don’t/didn’t like the way Hitler seemed to be portrayed and have thus stayed away from it😅
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Oh girl don’t watch the trailer!!! It’s horrible!! No, just try the movie. Once you watch it you’ll understand. It’s not what you think. Don’t worry. It’s so, so good, and I cry oceans!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
You might not be able to give me world advice, but certainly you can help with other things, like if a paragraph just doesn’t make sense, or a character is going out of their personality, etc.
Plus, what I mostly need right now is to see how readers respond to the story itself. ya know.
I’ll send the next scene if you’re ready!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
ack! i messed up your tag. two messages above for you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔
Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.
(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)
Aaron is more mature then Turin.
I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔
Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.
(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)
Aaron is more mature then Turin.
I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s flaws whether…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 years, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @anyone_else_whos_intereste
Against All Odds Playlist!!
1.) Jonathan: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_WNDIybIXs
2.) Jack: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwvRaHmn694
3.) Villain: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IskFoAob2wY&list=PL61EA7836AA4687F1&index=6
4.) Main ship: There is none.…[Read more]
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Honestly, I’m not totally shocked. I can see him turning into the type of villain Alpha actually is. Driven by fear and grief. Ofc, I’m pretty sure that’s not the type of villain you had in mind for him since most his grief comes from him being a man who cares, but if he were to turn villain…
Actually, that might be a great fanfic AU…
WOW. Yeah I can see it…but it’s so weird to think about!!!