Jaybird

@highscribeofaetherium

*sobbing*

@highscribeofaetherium

Or how about we find someone to fix the problem…….. lol.

@linus-smallprint

Interesting. My line of thinking was that the Bible says A.) the world will see us as fools and the gospel will sound foolish to them, and B.) Christ said to let the children come to him, for of such is the kingdom of heaven, and unless we believe like children we will not enter.

@linus-smallprint

Great! I have just started Chapter 6, but I’m in the middle of shooting one character and saving another, so I need to finish up with all that. lol. Then I’ll keep reading.

Here are my notes so far…..

Notes For The Narrow Path Trilogy

Ok Linus, I’m going to take notes as I go.

Prologue:
It’s really good, and It’…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great! Thank you! Yeah, like I mentioned before I’ve been reading through it! I’ve been taking notes, though I didn’t see the questions for readers. Are you interested in the notes I have so far?

Oh, I will bother you for chapters. Don’t encourage me. haha

@linus-smallprint

Wow, thank you so much! This is very helpful.

Yes, I will definitely talk to the boys (my brothers) about this, though they are a lot younger then Aaron and Turin, so it might be different for them, (right?)

Thanks again so much for taking the time to write all this out and explain it! This is totally going to help so much!

I…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Great. So far I’ve been reading through and I think I’m on chapter seven…. ? I’ve been jotting down notes as I go. i don’t know if you’re interested in them or not.

Did you see the newest LTBL section I posted?

@highscribeofaetherium

ACK! Someone go deal with whatever is eating the pictures!!!

@highscribeofaetherium

I’m going to see if I can post a picture.

@highscribeofaetherium

And eating up beautiful characters deserves a wicked name!!

@highscribeofaetherium

correct. Wyoh had just been banished.

@rae

Yep, highscribe is right. It’s also too friendly. I mean, how dare they eat our pictures!!! This needs to be a horrible terrible villain who is completely depraved and the worst of all master villains because he chews up beautiful characters before THEY EVER SEE THE LIGHT OF DAY!!!!

How about Diablo or Viper!

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, two things. I would suggest reading this scene out-loud, because there were a few sentences that felt a little jarring and out of flow with the rest. They just needed a different word arrangement or different punctuation.

The other thing would be a suggestion, and that would be this. When Leon is running toward the…[Read more]

@theshadow

Awesome!

@savannah_grace2009 Thank youuuuuuu. and yes, Riker deals with a lot of trouble😅😅

@ellette-giselle You can add any comments if desired!

@grcr Thx, girl 💖

@whalekeeper It’s….complicated😅 Reading Freedom’s Fire helps explain it, but basically….

Leon/Aadelheide were taken from the Ghetto, put in a truck, and were delivered to the camp (though Leon/Aadelheide didn’t know about the camp yet) but the driver of the truck…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Praying! 🙏🏻

@savannah_grace2009

I can’t remember if I told you before, but I’m praying for the request you post a little while back. 💕💕

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I’m a little scared……. lol. Here’s a short section.

Aaron had been speaking for more than an hour, carefully explaining the Gospel from the garden to the resurrection. Now, he looked about at the people. A few were crying, most stared at him, in disbelief, and a few had suspicion in…

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@whalekeeper

Great. Thank you so much!

Let’s see, Now to pick up the shattered fragments and begin to rebuild……. lol.