Jaybird

@whalekeeper

Oooo, yes! Like I said, I adore this stuff.

anyone want to see another?

@keilah-h

Thanks! ww2

@hybridlore

Thank you!!

@liberty

Thanks! What do you mean? Like how am I putting it together? I do that on Canva.

🫸🏻⚪️ @liberty

🫸🏻⚪️ @savannah_grace2009

Forgot about my snowballs, but got them written! I know I don’t have to share a snippet buuuuut….. I really want to. 🤣 So here you go:
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“Don’t try to turn her down.” Mrs. Palmer stood beside me, a knowing smile on her lips.

“Who?”

“Marzia. This is her way of accepting you into the family. She’ll be offended if you don’t let her spoil you.”…[Read more]

@loopylin

thx

@ellette-giselle

It’s beautiful! What are you using to make them?

@elishavet-pidyon

*Squeals back* Doesn’t it? =D

(Ooooo…I did not think of this)

Anyone want to see one of my MCs for The Crimson Rose?

@liberty   @keilah-h    @koshka    @linus-smallprint   @elishavet-pidyon   @rae   @hybridlore

Do you…eh…want me to rescue them? Live sort of ambushed me for a little while.

@koshka

Thank you.

I may develop this into a novel someday.

Okay…..

@liberty   SNOWBALL!!!

@highscribeofaetherium    SNOWBALL!!!

(oooooops)

@whalekeeper

No we’re not.

Rory was about to climb out of a window, and Leo literally left him hanging, because Koshka hasn’t RPd!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Good good!! A poignant ending, bittersweet but victorious.

Ah, I still think you could do something even shorter if you didn’t introduce it, but that’s also part of your writing style, I think, so I won’t prod.

@keilah-h

Thank you!!

@hybridlore

Yes.

@koshka

Look. you got under 200 words.

I’m not going any shorter.

I hardly got to say anything I wanted.

It’s awful, isn’t it.

In the city of Edran, the government had imposed strict control, monitoring every word and action. Daniel, Shelton, and Ezra Darman were not ready to cower. Their goal was clear: disrupt the government’s…

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@liberty

It is! Like poetry made of prose. I adore this stuff.

@ellette-giselle

I’d love feedback on the blurb. I want it to catch your attention, but not give too much away. Here you go.

WOW. Yes, it has totally caught my attention, and I’m hooked! It sounds very interesting. I think you wrote it quite well. It’s not too long and doesn’t give much away, but it offers the readers a huge tasty donut to hook o…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

My shortest one was 400, and I hardly set the stage

Flash fiction. The strength is in what you don’t say. Don’t worry about setting the stage, introducing characters, or anything like that. Snap a picture of a heart. Let poetry dance with prose.

I’m kinda sorry, but also definitely not. I absolutely love flash fiction, but have b…[Read more]