Jaybird

@ellette-giselle

Then maybe it’s a good plan.

Well, the object doesn’t need to be heavy. It needs to leave a convincing imprint on the scene. This the fabric filled sack.

@koshka

(lol. I have no idea where we’re going and so I didn’t know what else to RP. We can lose him as soon as you like.)

Rory

On Zero Rory, Leo, and Silvia all hesitated a step, throwing the rhythm off just barely. For a flash of a second Rory heard two steps. Then, the sound was gone, masked once more in the rhythm of their own…[Read more]

@koshka   @whalekeeper

Honestly, That’s what I was about to write, (except I didn’t think of the sack part, I just thought of dragging a heavy object.)

But yeah, that’s what I would do.

@elishavet-pidyon

Thank you!!! I really love his character!

@freed_and_redeemed

Leon and Riker!!!!!!!!

(You see, this is why I snowball you!)

Oh it was so good.

WAIT! Where’s the deaf boy?!?! I’m sure Riker has a deaf kid! Where did he go? Why didn’t Riker say hi to him? *goes into panic attack* don’t you dare tell me he’s dead! Say…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Exaggerated bow*

Here’s my card.

@linus-smallprint

(5 more minutes, and then we stop!)

SUCH A GOOD MOVIE!

Of course there’s the whole storks delver babies theory which isn’t true, (but I don’t know any people who still believe that)

but there are so many subtle things that are so, so good!

And the humor is chef’s kiss!

Okay, glad the scene works.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I love the map!!!

Okay, have fund being a terrible person and making all your readers mad at you.

lol.

It is super frustrating tho. HE WAS ON THE RIGHT TRACK!!

*sobs*

@rae

Eeeeek! I’ve got to catch up on my snowballs! I currently have 5!

@mineralizedwritings

Wow. He’s awesome. And delicate in a quiet strength kind of way. I keep coming back just to stare at his wings.

@elishavet-pidyon

oh…..I’ve never been hit 2x yet…..yesssssssss…*evil chuckle* now I get to hit 4 people!!!!! You will most like be one of them.

@elishavet-pidyon

oh…..I’ve never been hit 2x yet…..yesssssssss…*evil chuckle* now I get to hit 4 people!!!!! You will most like be one of them.

Agreed. Problem is, my hands are too full of snowballs at the moment to build myself one, so-

*dives into Elishavet’s snow fort*

@whalekeeper

Marcely!!!!!!!!

*Sniffle*

*Offers tea and cookies*

@whalekeeper

This is not something I would enjoy doing, but it’s a thing. So here.

1) Get some boots a couple sizes too big, a large overcoat, a pair of gloves, and some blood from a butcher (or kill a dozen or so pigeons).

2) Fill a burlap sack with a bed sheet, linens, ect. Set up the parlor with your typewriter facing a window as if you were…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ack! Sputter, GASP.

Fine. I’ll just have to use words from my actual WIP.

A voice broke the peace of the mountain side. “Wonder if they’ll take us this year.”

Zlati whipped around, concentration thoroughly shattered. Flopped a few paces away, Vulka lay in the sparse grass with a grin firmly in place. He rolled over onto…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Suspenseful music plays*

Leo

Great blue stars. Leo’s teeth clenched. A tail, here, halfway home. These creeps really hard no discretion. “Good man. On Zero.”

Three.

He tapped his com unt to alert Silvia.

Two.

Silvia even with them under the pretense of taking Quincy. Her eyes were sharp, fingers twitching over her…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @liberty @hybridlore

Here’s your 700 (actually a little over) for the 14 snowballs y’all threw at me.

ridiculous amount of snowballs

Y’all gotta chill XD

Mostly you, Ellette😤

😆

Riker nudged the front door open, walking into the small foyer. He stepped aside to give Leon room to get inside and glanced around the…

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@linus-smallprint

lol. Poor Joseph. It must have been awful for him.

ah yes. Eric is very proud of himself.
good. Good! I’m so glad this scene works well! “touch down Tulip!!” (Storks if you haven’t scene the movie that quite come from)
 

I’m surprised there was no comment on the Julian/Joseph conversation.
was it good? Does it fit?

@linus-smallprint

that’s what (frustratingly) keeps me from being able to say this scene doesn’t work.

I don’t like you at all.

yes! Yes it does make sense, and I hate that I’m saying it, but it fits.

I doubly don’t like you.

I also agree that the interactions seem very stiff or formal, but I wasn’t sure if that’s what you’re going for.