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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Wonderful. Glad it’s good.
I’ll take a look at the letter. Thanks! And yeah, I did a typo comb today. There were a lot. (yikes)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
That makes more sense. The last scene Joseph was terrified of Adrien. So, yeah, this scene is much sweeter. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔
I know! I don’t know why it keeps doing that. Grrr.
Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!
Aw! Thanks! Which scene were you referring too? The last one, or the one I just posted?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore
“Joseph!” Asher yelled.
Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.
Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.
The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint @keilah-h @hybridlore
“Joseph!” Asher yelled.
Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.
Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.
The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Thanks y’all! This was so great to come home to!
I’m glad y’all liked Adrian’s reintroduction! It’s one of my favorite scenes.
Ah, thanks Linus for the typo catches.
There we go, there is that Ardenta mistrust appearing.
Yes. Glad you caught that! Not only is the poor kid traumatized by soldiers, (as alluded to in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
AHHHH!!!!! LOVE THIS!!! I think this is gonna be my favorite book yet!!!
As for the PTSD triggers, if you could list all the triggers under the names of the two guys, i can help you try to brainstorm ways they would avoid them. At the moment, I’m not sure which triggers they would be. I mean, for some soldiers after war,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper
Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)
Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge
Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)
Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)
Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the city, and Ben and Flare fell off the roof on us. Then our newest c…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
AHHHHHH. I love the name Nikolai. Very nice. I might be more excited about the 3rd book than even the other two, although that would be kinda hard. *Stares hungrily at scene snippet*
As for life, yours is nuts too? It’s kinda reassuring to know I’m not the only KPer accidentally ghosting the kingdom. I don’t know if that…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @rae @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @whalekeeper @esther-c @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lollll-XD
Life/Writing Update, Request for Brainstorming Help, and maybe a scene snippet👀
Hiiii everyone!!! Y’all may have noticed that I’m not super active here on KP anymore😅 Truth is, life has been kinda hectic,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @grcr @rae @raxforge
Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, meeting up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.
Leon narrowed his eyes. He couldn’t be sure… but were those feathers on the stranger’s shoulders? He shook the thought aside. “We also came from ou…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @raxforge
Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, meeting up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.
Leon narrowed his eyes. He couldn’t be sure… but were those feathers on the stranger’s shoulders? He shook the thought aside. “We a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 6 days ago
wow.
crickets.
I didn’t think it was THAT bad.
lololol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?
@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin @jonas
Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, about to meet up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.
Leon squinted through the rain. The storm was muting the other sounds around them, but he was sure h…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 6 days ago
aw! Love it!!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
I wish. XD No, it’s a random adorable picture I found of a russian blue (my favorite cat breed {don’t tell my American tabby}).
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Koshka replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
I’d love to, I just don’t think I can right now. I know who I’d put in and everything.
Maybe I can join later though once this semester calms down/ends.
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