Jaybird

@whalekeeper

*realizes this is several pages back*

*shrugs*

Yes, I think it had to do with the helmet and nearly indestructible armor thing? Along with the galactic justice finder (although Leo is kinda on the other side of things if I’m not mistaken, but I haven’t actually seen The Mandalorian).

@ellette-giselle

Why thank you. I do try to…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yup! You are spot on!

@linus-smallprint

I just got way too much satisfaction out of that response.

@freed_and_redeemed

*GASPETH*

YES I want to see aesthetics!? I would totally read this book, or books, or whatever. It sounds absolutely lovely.

*deep breath*

*marginally calms down*

How long have you been working on it/has it been a thing? Even a vague figment of a dream?

@loopylin

Haha! SAME!!! I listened to the first two and read the rest!

Did you get the multi voice reading?

@keilah-h

Because the government outlawed marriage and she was married……………

@linus-smallprint

just joking. I just couldn’t resist.

It’s me. It’s the Elvish translation of my name.

@linus-smallprint

No!

I have no idea who that is!

@linus-smallprint

I just requested access. I’m using an alias but it’s me.

@koshka

aw, thank you!!!

@hybridlore

Well…. I was working on a project I need to get done….. but I’ve never been one to resist puppydog eyes.

@ellette-giselle

I am really enjoying the world building. Keep it up!

@koshka

Okay, that makes sense.

@ellette-giselle

Oops, sorry. I was waiting for class to start and in a hurry, so I wasn’t thinking through my writing.

What I meant was, do your characters need to make the right choice? Or should they mess up a couple times, possibly showing that God can work through even our mistakes, and working on character flaws. Although, you did already…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I almost said Eustace but I LOVE him in The Last Battle and I don’t love Eric at the moment……

@linus-smallprint

Lolol. Well, Bernd isn’t a super major character… so I guess you can get his name wrong.

Leon and Julian might not necessarily take the correct option first as well. It might be interesting to see some consequences for hiding their beliefs and how they have to deal with that.

Well…… they have had twelve or so years…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

lololol.

@theducktator    @linus-smallprint

What!! NO!! I love Edmond and I don’t like Eric very much………..

@koshka

sorry?

Not sure what you mean…..

@hybridlore

Sounds good!

@linus-smallprint

Nice, nice. Glad that’s starting to set in. It was harder to show them coming home when they hardly interacted with people and they were in a place that looked a lot like Ardenta because they were right on the boarder. ya know?

They’re names are…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Hmm.

Could you use this to portray a character flaw? Idk exactly what you have in mine for flaws though.

Hmmmmm…

@hybridlore   K.

QUESTION FOR THOSE WHO HAVE READ ALL POSTED SECTIONS.

So, as we all know, and @elishavet-pidyon pointed out….. Julian took that first encounter full-tilt and without a necessary dose of wise caution. However….. now I’m a little stuck.

Julian and Leon are living in the house of a family who worship’s idols. Due to their c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I was wondering why you never said anything even tho you were active yesterday. XD