Jaybird

@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Chapter 1

“Why is it so hot?” Hallie Woodbury tucked a loose strand of ginger hair behind her ear.

“I only have two words that can answer that question: New. Mexico.” Easton straightened and tossed his light brown locks off his forehead with a quick shake of his head.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

ooo, I’ll have to take a look! I love crying for movies. 🙃

I use Plugged In so I can check them out before I watch them. 😉

@whalekeeper

just castle in the sky! 😭😭😭😭

I really want to watch more but no one else does. I also saw War of the Rohirrim. Other than that, I haven’t seen any anime.

it’s just so beautiful and the stories are always told so well….. *sigh*

@whalekeeper

*bows dramatically*

sadly I am the only one in my family who likes anime! I guess when I move up to Idaho to go to college next year (Lord willing) I’ll barrow a bunch from the library. 😛

@highscribeofaetherium

yay!!

@highscribeofaetheriuM

no prob.

@rae

I will be more annoyed if you save people who need to die for character arc or story purposes.

@theshadow

Linus is 💯 correct. Plus, the more you pause the more you lose your flow. For me, I turn off autocorrect and grammarly, and I just write and write and don’t look back until the whole thing is on paper. Beginning to end. Then you can go back and start editing and fine-lining and rewriting. Give yourself a foundation to build off of, o…[Read more]

@rae

and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆

Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!

@hybridlore

Thanks!!! ☺️

@smiley @keilah-h @theshadow

Thank you ladies! Sure thing!!

@theducktator

Wait really?? Oh I didn’t even notice! Maybe I’ll have to read the book now 😝

@theducktator

thank you for the prayers!

@linus-smallprint

yeah…. If I wanna risk seeing porn worthy covers when I open it. I found a few round about ways, and I did to Alcatraz that rout (until those were taken down for being politically offensive) but I honestly don’t have time to listen to audio books and I can read a book in a couple hours. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@keilah-h

thanks!! I might take you up on it.

@linus-smallprint

sounds good.
After all “Stories Are Soulfood” and I’d rather feed my mind and soul with good things rather than a poison laced supper. 😆

@linus-smallprint

wow!! This is so helpful!!
yeah, as I said before I’m not even gonna touch the series with Lesbian characters. So I’ll skip that set. I’m intrigued by the first Mistborn set. Not so sure about the others, I don’t really like sci-fi anyhow. (Though someone told me a few of my books I’ve written are calcified as sci-fi! 🤯…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I know!!

yeah, it sure does.

@keilah-h

aw thanks! 🥰😅

he was abandoned and grew up on the streets or in and out of orphanages and foster care.

his story is really sad and really wild. He should not be the man that he is today. Only God can do that.

@linus-smallprint

okay, that makes sense. I may opt out of that one. Do you think it’s worth it despite objections, or does the bad override any good you might get out of it in your opinion?

also, did you see my question on the other review?

thanks again!

@highscribeofaetherium

yeah. More dress uniform type look but still practical. He’s an officer so he’ll wear a grey uniform with the leather jacket overtop. Is this making sense? Or should I try to describe it better? (As an artist I like as much creative room as possible when drawing characters which is why I was limiting the description a lit…[Read more]

@theducktator

oh gross!! If there’s going to even be hints of a gay couple I’m not touching that. I don’t know if I want to even read anymore of his stuff! I don’t want support that sort of thing. Yeah, Stormlight is out.