Jaybird

@grcr

*screeches*

THAT DRAWING OF RAX IS AMAZING!!!

I would love a drawing, but it seems you are a little swamped. Would you mind tagging me if you get an opening?

@the_lost-journal

That’s a little harsh. Especially saying that everyone who plays it is a jerk. I happen to love soccer, and I played it for eight years! None of what you are mentioning about name calling and such ever happened on our team. Yeah, it hurts! Yes, I went to the ER a few times! Yes, I passed out on the field twice. But so what.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Maybe in a minute then……..

For anyone who plays the beautiful game!! (aka soccer)

@hybridlore

I used to live in Colorado.

It is nothing like this place.

Ahem—I don’t see much of a reason for Conrad’s death.

That’s because you don’t know his full story.

I know his life, and I know that it was the completion of his character arc.

Yeah… *starts to fear for your characters safety*

yeah you should!

*second guesses…

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@hybridlore

Yup! You’ll have to be quicker on the draw. 😂

but I don’t even think it’s that extreme there.

Nope, not Colorado. Weather changes like that are normal for us in our crazy state. This is life, y’all. We don’t get spring and fall. Just winter and summer.

Oh boy… I was shocked. 🥺😢 But, then Julian and Leon wouldn’t have become Christi…

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@hybridlore

LOVE THEM!!!!!!! (also, KP WON’T GIVE ME NOTIFS!!!) sorry for the delay in response.

I love them so muuuuucccchhhh!!!

yesterday it was 80 degrees.

Today it’s 5 and snowing.

what a life!

🤣

@whalekeeper

Yeah contacting someone who used to be affiliated with KP might be a good idea. Idk how busy Josiah is, but it’d be great just to know that the site will keep running.

@liberty

Good morning!!! You’re bright and early! Normally Hybridlore is my first reader. Looks like you got her place! 😂

That makes sense about Conrad.

Can I know Conrad’s whole story?

The whole thing? Girl, it’s like a whole ‘nother book! I know the whole life of every character who has a name, (and even some who don’t). It’s just part of h…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*squeals with delight over a new treasure*

Erich and his wife Helene are such a sweet couple, and Erich has the makings of a strong leader.

*dances around the room*

I am SO stealing that name from you!!!!!!! I have a Helen in my story…but I never thought of spelling it like that! It fits my character so much more to add an…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊

Yes! I was reminded of Shasta as well!

But why do you like him over Rolf’s other friends??! (I mean, I like him best, but I know his entire story. You just saw a tiny bit of i…

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@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
         October 7th
         The Empire

As you will see by yesterday’s entries, I have returned to the Empire. It took all of yesterday to chronicle everything that happened to Ro…

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@liberty

Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.

Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊

Hmm…the part w…

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@hybridlore

Yes!!! They’re back!

Glad you liked it!

Lol 🤣

I try.

This did seem a little out of place. I’m not sure if there’s something else he could say—I think he was sort of teasing, but still, it stuck out to me.

Okay yeah, makes sense. The odd thing about editing is I can’t get back into the character’s heads in the same way, so somet…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Another thing:

Why is it that bad guys always seem to ride black horses?

“Because, God has called me to bring the message of salvation to my people,” Rolf replied.

Hmmm…I thought you were going to take the story to where God had called those two to stay there and evangelize that area…but I guess not.

Leon smirked, havi…

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@ellette-giselle

Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.

Hmm…the part when they got tied in the dessert gave me flashbacks of Leiand.

And…*crying* You killed another one of my favorite characters! Why…[Read more]

Maybe she just has a very common face 🤷🏻‍♀️🤣

@whalekeeper

That’s so insane… 👀

Lately my book has been feeling more real to me, but that’s just because I’ve been fleshing things out more. i didn’t think my characters were ACTUALLY being brought to life. 😳😂

@whalekeeper

But it’s so sad when the favotite character dies!!! And I love crying over books!!

If they don’t die she at least needs to make life miserable for them for a few chapters. You never know if you’re hero has what it takes until you throw him in the thick of it. I have high hopes for both, and I want to see them live up to…[Read more]