Jaybird

@keilah-h

and this

@keilah-h

This is Bastille

@hybridlore

I’m like 95% sure they’re going to survive.

Wow.

This is all that came to mind.

@keilah-h

It’s a girl.

@linus-smallprint

I don’t need no Literary License.

I think so. It’s still early in the book. You could kill them all off and switch to a different character at this point as the protagansit, but that would be really weird as you have already established Leon and Julian as the protagonists.

hmmm.

@linus-smallprint

For the reason Leon mentioned. Reflexes happening faster than recognition.

Aha. Makes sense.

From this description, first the yelling and banging, then coming down to see everyone else only just standing there, I thought there was a riot outside. So I was surprised to learn that it was only snow and that there had been no…

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@hybridlore

Oh!

well this is a surprise.

First off, I had expected wails of protest.

Secondly, I was expecting comments about Aelic’s character, so the Julian remark totally threw me off. 😂

Thanks though!

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NEXT SECTION!

The next morning, Julian woke to the sound of voices and banging. He leapt to his feet and yanked on his boots. Leon was already pulling on his hat and beat him into the other room.

When Julian arrived, he found Marti…

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@linus-smallprint

I think you are pacing this well for a return journey

Phew. Thanks. 😅

Sneaky. But not wise.

why?

😁

@hybridlore

why?

@hybridlore

yay!

why? what are you worried about?

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NEXT SECTION!

Leon, Julian, Rolf, Aelic, and Roland remained with Heinrich and Johannes at the University for five days. It was a wonderful time of fellowship and encouragement for them all. The companions would have liked to stay lon…

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@elishavet-pidyon

WOW!!!

THAT IS STUNNING! I love the perspective and the action.

@whalekeeper

I was thinking the same thing, but I thought maybe I was mistaken because the male version wasn’t coming to mind. 😂

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I don’t think I’ll be able to post today, and if I do it’ll be late this afternoon. I’m going to be busy all day.

Guns.

Yay!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

It’s beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

(Eh, point taken. I think I’ll just chuck the courtier on the horse instead)

@the_lost-journal

People may not agree with me, but I’ve lived it and it works. It is refreshing. It is power! IT IS LIFE!!!

Isaiah 28:11-12 — For with stammering lips and another tongue will he speak to this people. To whom he said, This is the rest wherewith ye may cause the weary to rest; and this is the refreshing: yet they would not h…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oh, my bad. When readers are reading the books without gaps in the middle, it would probably be easier, too. But yeah, just an intro to make it clear that it’s the same people would be great.

Thats what I’m thinking, but yeah, I can throw that it. I plan to release these as a box set all at once, so that should help.

@hybridlore

Especially with the way that you left off the last book–with Rolf, Roland, and Aelic getting separated from Leon and Julian because they wanted to go visit their family (right?), I think you should remind us.

No, they haven’t traveled far enough for that to be a thing yet. So far they are all heading in the same direction t…[Read more]