Jaybird

@esther-c

Oooh. That sounds so interesting!! I enjoyed reading it and am now even more intrigued in your story!! Dylan sounds really cool! 😀

Thank you girl!! Oh good! Yeah, Dylan is pretty cool lol. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! Yeah, that clears things up a lot. Sorry if I made too many assumptions, thanks for elaborating! Does 5 not seem a little old though? That’s the age most children begin school. You say that he still remembers, but comprehension of mom, dad, and sibling names would long since been well ingrained into his mind at that point. I…

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@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 Ahh I am so sorry!! I meant to RP before now 😅.

Vance

Bren stopped struggling as I held the knife close to his neck.

“R-Ronnie…?”

“It’s alright Bren,” His brother said, though his face expression said otherwise. “It’s…it’s gonna be alright.”

He turned his attention to me, glaring. “Let. My. Brother. Go!”

“Not…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww Riker!!! I love him so much <3<3

And Franz!!!! You better be nice!!!

@thearcaneaxiom

Aww no, don’t feel bad!! I loved all the questions!!! I mean, KP is a place where we can help each other and encourage each other in their writing! 😀 The questions helped a lot with Dylan’s character arc! I’ve already figured it out a lot more :).

Yeah, he doesn’t know that what they’re doing is wrong (Or maybe his…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YEP, TONY!!!! 🥰🥰🥰 (stuck with a bunch of teenagers…😅😉🤭😂)

🥰🥰🥰 (Poor guy XDXD) And, would it be weird if Matthew recognizes him? He’s a modern 14 year old who loves LOTR and Avengers…so he would recognize him…unless it would be weird 😅😉🤭😂

Oh, I can tell. 😂 But I make it obvious about Steve/Bucky, so…🤷🏻‍♀️

XDXD Yeah…we love us…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

TONY!!!! YAY!!! 😅🤭 Yeah, Tony Stark is one of my favorite’s…if you couldn’t tell XDXD

Ugh that will be hilarious!! Tony with a bunch of teens XDXD @mineralizedwritings Bahahaha That’s hilarious girl!! Tauren is so fun XDXD.

@freedomwriter76

Yeah! That would be fun! 😀

Also, Lyla isn’t in the group, I took her out when I put in Dylan and Asher. But I might add her back in later 😉.

@mineralizedwritings

XDXD Yeah, the charries in that group are more of the cuddly sweet kind…I can’t picture any of them having weapons lol.

@loopylin

😲😲😲

Eddie that was AWESOME!!!!…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Am I suppose to RP next?? I know I posted one, but I can’t remember if you’ve replied or not. XD Sry. Lol

@keilah-h

Blueberries………*licks lips* You’re making me hungry. (He has this weird obsession with them.)

Lol XD

That’s hilarious!!

@thearcaneaxiom

XD English is a perfectly consistent language isn’t it! XDXD

For real though!! We have so many borrowed words and weird special sounds and rules. It can be kind of annoying. 🤦🏻‍♀️

If you can’t tell, English is one of my least favorite subjects, lol. It’s kinda ironic me being a writer and all. XD

@80strish

That was so funny!! I love her already!

Oh wait… was I not supposed to give critique on this forum…? 😅

Oops…

XD

@lightoverdarkness6

Oooh. That sounds so interesting!! I enjoyed reading it and am now even more intrigued in your story!! Dylan sounds really cool! 😀

@freedomwriter76

I really enjoyed reading that!! One thing I will point out though.

Riker’s sister came forward, Naja still in her arms. She looked up at Riker with a playful smirk. “Have you…

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@acancello

I like what Ami’s answer to the question was, that’s a really good way to describe her!

Ikr? She doesn’t like going out of her comfort zone.

Yet I make her do it all the time in my WIP. Poor girl. XD

@thearcaneaxiom

Nele: Well, so do savors… savories… savori?

Hmm… 🤔

How thought-provoking…

Can “savory” be used as a noun??

And if so…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

@esther-c (HeY hEy!)

jkjk XD

Lol XD

I’ll try to start reading from the beginning today. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Oh okay good. 😅 If we ever get Netflix then maybe I can!

Yeah, I’ve heard lots of good things about the show. I really should watch it sometime.

(Sorry, but I have watched the non-existent movie before…🫢… I was 10 tho, so I don’t remember it.)

Okay, I will! Thanks for the recommendation! 😀

I’m doing great!! About to start…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Matthew

Kiri smiled as Asher blushed furiously, stuttering out his words. She batted her eyes, gripping his arm.

He blushed even more, then glanced at me. I smiled at him. “Having fun?” I mouthed.

I was just glad that Kiri wasn’t hanging onto me like that.

Just then, Kiri said, “Great! Off we go then! Lila?”

Lila raised a bro…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooh okay! So my villain…*spoiler* Vance kidnapped Dylan at a young age, intending to raise him as his own. He and his wife had a son, but unfortunately his son was stillborn, and he needed an heir to the organization that he had created. So Dylan grows up believing that he is Vance’s son. Vance had some animosity towards D…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @felicity @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @any-one-else

(Freedom, I finally got some of it down!! 😅) Okay, here is a small part of a scene I’ve been working on! This first two parts are just showing some of Dylan’s life, a little bit anyway. The next part gets intense. And the last part…[Read more]