Jaybird

Ooo, I really liked it! Super good! I like where this is going!

Yeah, Jonas is right again. I think you could honestly keep it in this chapter as long as you put something more important in the first section. Like the brother. Who is this other brother? This is the first we have heard of another sibling, and all we have is, “Lilitu had another…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Of course that would also mean going to bed at a decent hour…like at 9 PM?!?!? That’s so early but I need to start going to bed earlier…so you could be my bedtime accountability partner XD XD

9:00 a good time to go to bed. 9:00-9:30 is my goal. Well, as you can see, I’m awake so if you want to do some sprinting I’ll do it with…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

@theshadow

 
ALTERNATE ENDING!!!
Julius lowered his head, but beyond the taunts of the voice, he could feel something. It was like the warmth of the sun’s first rays creeping into the courtyard. It was a tiny, tiny sliver of peace. Julius found himself looking back at Marcus and Flavia. I was there for them. A voice w…[Read more]

@theshadow

I do like the ambiguity of the ending, I just wanted to make sure Julius chose right lol.

well, now that there’s two of you saying it and not just one, I feel more inclined to go to go dig up the alternate ending from it’s hiding spot. lol.

It is good thing, it shows that your book has an impact on the reader.

Yay!!! I’m so glad!!

Your…

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@savannah_grace2009

between 5:00 to 6:00 in the morning

@savannah_grace2009

It’s 1:30 over here. Hmm…. Yeah, it’s the morning that I write the best in. I can’t think in the afternoon and evening. I am a 100% morning person.

@savannah_grace2009

No, i like never write in the evening. I normally try to get off before 2:00 at the latest.

We would be opposites wouldn’t we. XD

@savannah_grace2009

Awesome! I’m not consistently writing today because it’s the 4th. You want to try it out tomorrow? I’ll be writing in the morning.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh! I basically do that all the time! lol. So I would just tell you what time I’m “sprinting” to?

@savannah_grace2009

what is “this”?

@ellette-giselle

Yay! I’m so excited to see how they turn out!!

@esther-c

Hello Esther!

Awesome! I will get to work on this as soon as I can! I’ll prob. have it by the day after tomorrow, but maybe tomorrow. we’ll see! Thanks for the reference pics!

Woah… why is her’s so big?? XD

Hallie

Easton (I forgot to say he has glasses xp)

@ellette-giselle

Ooh, this looks so cool! I’d love if you could do a brother and sister for me!

Name: Easton Woodbury

Age: 17

Gender: male

Clothing: long-sleeved sweater, light or dark jeans, sneakers(?)

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): 90s!

Physical appearance: 6’ 0’’; light skin; gray eyes; dirty blonde/light…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I read super fast too, which is why I would like to know what the world is like so I can concentrate on the plot. lol.

@savannah_grace2009

(Sorry I took forever to reply!! Life has been busy and I’m doing the King’s Daughters’ Writing Camp this month)

Lukas

Lukas bit his lip, his gaze roaming the ground as if searching for an answer in the dirt. “W-well, I don’t think H-He’d just stop listening…” he wet his lips. “B-but I can pray for you if-if you want.”…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Actually it was “Cassian ran, trying to outrun time itself”

Oh, whoops. sorry!

I used to try explain everything in the first few chapters but got told I was info dumping….

So now I’m too scared to go back, and I don’t know how to explain everything without doing that!

Help???

well, I can say personally that I get annoyed w…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I read the last two chapters and that hit me hard too!!!

I almost cried….😭😭😭💔💔

I’m kinda cheering right now, even though I know that sounds really bad……..

I need to read it all the way through again!

Wow!! Really? That’s awesome!

So, what is your opinion on the end? should I leave it unknown like it is?

Thank you so m…[Read more]