Jaybird

@grcr

Ok then. You asked for it!!

Jonathan’s eyes widened in terror and his face went white. He had expected imprisonment and perhaps more interrogations. His mind had already been working through all the escape tactics he knew of. Now, he stopped short. Death? The thought had never crossed his mind. It was in that moment that Jonathan…

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@theducktator

Sorry this took a minute! Here she is.

@elishavet-pidyon

Was competently blindsided. *picks slef up out of dirt and dusts off* “I feel like Calvin”

And as you love Peter Pevensie (from the BOOKS), and Smalden, draw beautifully, and like skirts, I feel an unavoidable obligation to join the welcoming team. So I shall have to make the most of it.

Aw, thank you! I’m so glad you like my…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Interesting plot turn! Looks like Sef and her mom are gonna have a forbidden child…… Interesting. I don’t have much to say yet. I would like to see how some of this starts panning out. I’m definitely intrigued enough to keep reading!

@keilah-h

Um no. Oh wait, I can’t say that ’cause it’s Monday. 🙁 lol.

Well, It’s Monday! I’m ready!!! Shoot!

@princesachronicle22 @hybridlore @grcr @koshka

Ok. Wow, I’m off for one day and the whole world tags me. You should see my inbox!!! lol. Ok, because I don’t want to go back and weed through who said what, I’m just tagging y’all who tagged me and replying to the world in general.

So, for the cover, it looks like I’ll be doing style seven.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I like number 7 best I think. The title feels like it is part of the picture.

Jonathan, you reckless, courageous, foolish kid. What did you think you were doing? (I think you’d get a long just fine with Vulkasin to the rest of the world’s danger)

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

@loopylin

AWESOME!! Thank you so much!

Could you Dominic?

He is 16 years old, slender, lighter skin tone, has black hair and dark eyes. He’s a guy ballet dancer. (I’ll attach a picture of the kind of outfit he’d wear.) He can be really funny and chipper, but also really quiet and serious. Depending on the situation. He is trying to escape from…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Looks like it might be seven!

Anyone else?

@highscribeofaetherium

Nice, that’s two votes for 7.

@loopylin

Howdy Loopy,

Are you still drawing characters, or are you taking a break?

@esther-c

Thanks! The feedback is super helpful!

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, that makes more sense. It just didn’t come across like that to me when I read it.

Maybe you could reword it, but yeah. I didn’t find the base concept cringe at all.

Yes, I would completely agree there.

@ellette-giselle

1, 2, and 7 are my favorites.

@savannah_grace2009

Ooo, love it!! Ok, one there that’s a huge cringer for me is this. “You believe in me when I can’t believe in myself” I really, really don’t like the believing in yourself thing. You should not believe in yourself because you are nothing to believe in. On our own, we are nothing. Our works are nothing. It is ONLY through C…[Read more]

@theducktator

So you’re good with the skirt?

@savannah_grace2009

I think I’ve just been captivated by the battle between good and evil, light and darkness. Sometimes life doesn’t have happy endings. Sometimes life is HARD. So I write about it.

It’s not cuz I’m just like “Okay I need something super dark to write about cuz let’s just torture my charries!!! Yay!!!” I’m trying to be real and…

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and last one.