Jaybird

@theshadow I definitely agree with @whalekeeper on this one

and you can also just talk to God about it. He knows, He gets it, He understands more than you may think He does and cares more than any of us could ever imagine.

He cares about what you care about, and I agree with Whaley that you really don’t have to stress😊 Unless it’s clearly…[Read more]

@keilah-h

I’m glad you put the takeover-by-the-empire subplot back in. I was kinda wondering if you’d forgotten it lol

No, I haven’t forgotten. This book moved way faster previously, but people keep telling me to add things so now I feel like it’s a lot slower.

Right now it’s not clear if they’re married yet or not.

what? No! They aren’t married!!

@whalekeeper AHHHHH I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHHHH

and they were both on point🤌🏻 especially Fin😂 he was undeniably in character

It’s also funny bc I was going to log on and ask if you were still working on this yesterday but decided against it XXXXD

@linus-smallprint

I don’t mind extensive conversation scenes. But some others might not.maybe you could have this conversation later on, (if at all) but no pressure.

Thanks for sharing that clip!

You are very welcome! Have you seen the movie? (Courageous) If not, you really should. It’s pretty amazing. So is the movie Fireproof, which is my all…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m sorry, I can’t help you much here. I’ve never done this. Maybe you could ask your dad?

Haha! Well I didn’t expect help on that part!! lol.

I would like the scene where Aaron goes up to Sabina and asks her about marriage and see the conversation they have.

Ugh. You would say you wanted me to write that scene.

Grrrr. Okay,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank you!

Oh he’s about to have a much worse time. He brakes his leg when he lands, gets into a gunfight, and then is captured by the most sadistic villain ever.

😀

@rae

It’s tipping down so the tail will hit the ground first. He was trying to go up to escape the shelling but he wasn’t fast enough. it’ll start flipping as it goes down, but for now the engine killed and it’s falling.

does that make sense?

@linus-smallprint

(In other words, is he trying to be disciplined in fighting his worry, but forgetting to be dependant on God to help him (which seems quite likely since he is struggling with doubt itself))

100% Yes.

I know I’m not much of a romance guy, but even I wanted to see this in developed scenes instead of a summary. I want to see t…

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@linus-smallprint

Nah, just call him Alan. That’s his name after all. I mean, people don’t refer to you as “The Canadian” or “The guy with the wired way of measuring fences” or, “The guy with a part time job” lol.

They call you Justin, or Linus. those are your names/nicknames/online-names. but they are still your names.

Just call him Alan.

I…

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@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

OK, I’m back. new section, and would really love feedback on this because It’s still in a stage where I would be wil;ling to change or tweak things.

It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her…

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Here’s one I did for one of my books. This is Even, my pilot. He’s not having a great day at the moment. But I sure love the angle!!!

@linus-smallprint

PS.

Any thoughts on my music styles? lol.

@linus-smallprint

I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
other then that, no complaints.
(I notice you use a lot of British spellings. I’m guessing that’s Canadian?…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

ack!! My old nemeses— facial hair! I can never do it right! It always ends up looking like charcoal smears.

I’ll try, but I’m gonna murder this fella’s face!

yeah, we’ve been doing two weeks.

@theshadow

well, I don’t think this is going to be a one-size-fits-all-easy-answer. However, I’m willing to share what I do.

so, I get said idea wether it be plot, character, or scene. From there I write it down in a special journal specifically for this purpose. Then, I pray about it. I ask God to guide me and speak through my writing. I ask…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009
@whalekeeper
@keilah-h

im glad we’re all on the same page now.
I agree that you can’t pin marriage to an age. Marriage comes in God’s timing. However, I believe Aaron and Sabina are ready. Yes, they share affection, and they also have been seeing each other day in and day out for a year or more! Knowing someone so well like…[Read more]

@keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper

ok, to start off, I am eighteen. I have already received, (or rather my dad received) a request to court me from a young man. This didn’t go anywhere for reasons I don’t feel like I needed to share. However, age has nothing to do with it.

To continue, twelve was the marrying age of medieval girls who…[Read more]

@keilah-h

well, I have a weakness for Norse styles of music, clothing, art, ships, customs, weapons, and warfare. god of war certainly has some strong Norse leanings and so I like it a lot.