Jaybird

@keilah-h

They were characters from a very old WIP.

Glad you like it.

Kenna and Zeke’s kids!!!

@keilah-h

Glad to hear that!

I wouldn’t delete this, I need it for Joseph’s arc and to really set the whole stage. But, I’m glad you liked it enough for it to be a keeper weather I can trim it or not.

Btw, completely off topic, You’re 15? Right?

@keilah-h @hybridlore

Okay, that’s two against me.

Glad you like the map!!

I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………

what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?

@hybridlore

Yeah. I’ll see what @linus-smallprint and @keilah-h say, and from there I’ll make a decision once I have everyone’s opinion.

I think I could end up trimming things up a little if I need to.

Well, I know the belief in Divine Election is not held by everyone. Some people believe that anyone who chooses to be saved can be saved,…[Read more]

@rae

Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.

@jonas

Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.

I guess give us a few in case he decides to make his way over here. Otherwise we might just have to abandon him.

@rae

No worries. It’s okay to call him Barron. I think i have his names down now.

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

For anyone interested, here is the current map.This is what everything looks like in this book.

@hybridlore

Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.

First I’ll reply to yoyr note on the scene.

You might want to consider trimming it down, but if you can’t, that’s fine. Just try to think about what will move the character growth forward and work for this story/target audience specifically.

So, it wasn’t sup…[Read more]

@rae

wow. How did you know GRCR was RPing?

@rae  @grcr   @raxforge

Wow.

Crickets.

I thought the speech was pretty good myself……………

@hybridlore  @keilah-h  @linus-smallprint

Alrighty people! Have fun with this very long section! I hope you enjoy it.

Also, Linus, I am starting to have some high hopes for this book, despite what I said about it not being my favorite. I think i might enjoy it a lot. Just let me know if it’s starting to feel like a LTBL repeat. (If you would b…[Read more]

@rae  @grcr   @raxforge

Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge (No kidding! It grows faster than a kitten!!)

“I wasn’t going to kill…Ben,” Baron mentioned in his quiet monotone.

Julian turned and cocked his head sideways, a grin pulling at the corner of his mouth. “You sure had me fooled.”

Le…[Read more]

@rae @raxforge @grcr

Leon and Julian–> With Baron (Brutus), Ben Gunn, and Flare, at the Everstrand edge

Leon whipped about as a voice spoke from behind.

“Are you from around here?” the newcomer asked.

Leon blinked. The uniform this stranger had on was unlike anything he had ever seen. He glanced at the young man’s boots and squinted. They did…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Maybe whoever wins becomes the next prompter and the next judge/one of the next judges, that seems like a fair deal.

Yes! That sounds like a good idea!

@grcr

Oh of course! But be warned, Baron will try to kill you. *sigh*

lol.

@linus-smallprint

This is one of the songs from a favorite musical of mine. It isn’t perfect, because the main character is married and has a son, but this song of his really reminded me of Alan.

Let me know what you think.

I was wondering the same thing.

@jonas

Bring it on!