Jaybird

@linus-smallprint

Okay, that’s a lot of exclamation marks. You know five exclamation marks is a sure sign of madness, right? But you couldn’t settle for five, you went for six. (But who am I kidding, we’re all authors. Madness is sure to come with that.)

How dare you question my wise and perfect choice of exclamation marks! I have perfect contr…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 

Wooph! Got a lot to catch up on! Let’s see how far I get before I have class…

Yeah. Sorry about that. I kinda went on an editing streak and hybridlore was encouraging it. lol.

In the part where he is watching Arron in the fountain, he puts an end to it, and I was saying he was harsh based of of that. But I forgot tha…

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@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

NEXT SECTION!!

Joseph sat at the table staring at nothing.

In the corner, Sabina was holding a sobbing Eric, and Asher was sitting beside Noah, his face pressed against him. Alicia was at the other end of the table, her hands over her face.

Darrien had a hand on Joseph’s shoulder…

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@hybridlore

I just saw this and thought of you.

@hybridlore

Okay. Now your good to reply.

@hybridlore

How could you kill your FAVORITE off, Ellette??? 😢

Aaron was my very favorite character I’ve ever written.

It’s dangerous to be my favorite.

Oh, it’s been picked back up. Just slightly bent now. 😁

good. lol. (No one saw that tantrum you threw. all’s good, all’s good. lolololololol)

Cool! So… how old is Joseph in the lat…

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@hybridlore

Don’t reply to the above yet.

I’m answering you again.

@hybridlore

lol. That’s great.

So because Julian and Joseph showed empathy for Adrian in that scene… will the government think they are Christians too?

Julian’s empathy is understandable. He’s trying to stop them from killing his little brother. He would have done that no matter the crime. He reacted badly enough to what Adrian said, that h…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

Here is Joseph!

(Adrian was posted at the bottom of page 8 for anyone that missed that.)

@hybridlore

Adrian was my favorite!

Oh no! I’m sorry he was your favorite! (He was my favorite too at this point.)

 

Your *not actual* book has been officially thrown across the room.

If you don’t pick it up again you’ll never know what happens…….. then I can’t be faulted for it being depressing, because you put it down right after…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I feel bad. I’m sorry. But then again, I’m also not. You know how that goes.

Okay, I was super stressed that you were going to find out what was going to happen because of Julian being in the RP! I’m so glad you forgot! I was thinking, “Shoot, I shouldn’t have put him in there until after this book.”

Question- how come all the other…

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@hybridlore

here, this will help.

@hybridlore

Are you for real crying, or just your emojis?

I’m sorry. I know it’s sad.

You were so bubbly in the previous post, and now you are so sad. Part of me feels really bad, and the other part of me is wickedly gleeful.

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

Does anyone want to see a Joseph or Adrian aesthetic board?!?

I’m so, so sorry to all of you who loved Adrian! I loved him so much too!! He is a dear, dear character of mine and close to my heart. Believe me, I cried again, even though this is my 4th time through this draft.

But Adrian is safe and he’s home!

(And honestly, he’s only a fabrication of my imagination, if that makes you feel any…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h

3rd SECTION FROM TODAY

I am on a roll!

Poor Linus. You’ll have so much catching up to do. Sorry.

Another long day passed in prayer and fear. Noah and Darrien had to leave for work as normal, but this time it was much harder for Joseph to see them go, and it seemed to be the same f…

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@liberty (moving the convo over here so we don’t spam the short story topic 🤪)

Well, I’m slowly getting back into a rhythm too. I’m starting to write consistently as well. I’m hoping to start working on a WIP. I’ve also started freelancing and am writing for an Amish magazine, which is very exciting! So far, I’ve had one story win 3rd place in th…

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@esther-c

Nice!

Well, I’m slowly getting back into a rhythm too. I’m starting to write consistently as well. I’m hoping to start working on a WIP. I’ve also started freelancing and am writing for an Amish magazine, which is very exciting! So far, I’ve had one story win 3rd place in their contest and get printed, and they recently accepted…[Read more]

@rae

did you ever do a board for Barron? If so, have you posted it? If not, I’d love to see one!!!

@hybridlore

ah yes, my struggles with the male sex and relationships. *sighs* Guys just don’t make sense sometimes. (and girls totally do because who would ever be confused by girl relationships and emotions. no one. Right?)

That new section looks good. The end feels like a perfect transition to a scene with Adrian… is that what happens n…

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