Jaybird

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, wow, must have really sobered you. No comment on the amount of exclamation marks. lol. After I posted it, I looked back and was like, “wow, there’s a lot.” lol.

And no comment on the fact that I offed Joseph’ best friends.

Ah. So there was a positive event in there. This is what you were referring too.

Yes, and I have a…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Maybe. This is a question I will ask at the end, but so far, what would the top scenes that you would like to see illustrations for be?

Ooo, I haven’t thought of this really.

Okay. well, the Stripe one of course. That would be super funny/cute, especially with his ears flat. lol.

Maybe one of Martha and Alan talking. I would…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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Joseph sat at the table and stared at his plate. Noah and Darrien had already eaten and were pulling on their boots. They knew the hard day of work they had ahead, and they had been able to eat

Sabina put her arm over Joseph’s sh…

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@linus-smallprint

Yippy! Stripe was HUGGED!!!!

AWWWWW! it was soooooo cute!!!!!! Now you have to draw a picture of it!!!

Aside from Stripe being hugged, I really enjoyed the chapter.I’m glad you brought the crow back in. I was wondering how long it would be before you tied that part of the plot back into the story.

Also, one…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Woah, are you accusing me of being a sadist?

lololololol.

Thanks I’ll check it out!

I’m no longer surprised when a character is taken/died. In fact, I was expecting it any time now. That’s not good.

Is it though? I mean sure, in modern storytelling that is a thing to reserve for smacking readers with, but could the fact that no one is safe almost be a shock in in of itself? Maybe I’ve read too much from early church histo…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

thanks so much for this feedback.

im not going to say anything so as not to shed light on which path i take, but i will say that it was extremely helpful knowing your thoughts.

thanks again!

@linus-smallprint

Why was I expecting this to be something positive?

You should know me better than that.

It kind of made the event feel like a slap. (Ouch. I’m feeling Josephs pain.)

Perfect! That’s exactly what I wanted.

It also feels more tragic because of how casually Eric and Asher headed out. It was just a normal day.

Ah yes. Poor b…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

@hybridlore

Drat.

KP isn’t letting me know that y’all responded!

Grrr.

Hmm, it looks like I really stirred it up around here. lol.

Oops! I fathom ya’ll be the wrong people folk!

🏃‍♂️💨

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

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Sorry it’s so short.

Joseph woke. For a long moment he lay, trying to figure out what was happening and where he was. He had been so exhausted he didn’t even remember lying down. There was an odd sound, a sound he knew he had heard many times be…

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@grcr

Many that live deserve death. And some that die deserve life.

~J.R.R. Tolkien.

@grcr

Oh.

Wow.

I didn’t even know you were reading.

Hmmm.

Why shouldn’t I kill them?

@power

I’m sorry, what?

@esther-c

That’s okay!!! You can make a animal character, (if you need help for that, I’d love to help!) or just turn one of your characters into an animal!

@liberty I would if I could buuuut… I don’t really have any animal characters 🤪 Sorry!

On a side not, I think people tend to give satan too much credit. He seems to be view as the opposite of God, satan the ultimate evil, God the ultimate good. . . but this view is very flawed. I think a more accurate comparison would be a flea opposed against of the universe (the observable universe is about  500,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 miles…[Read more]

I haven’t read the story thingamagiggley (I postulate n reckon that’s what this here forum thingy is for), but I hath a very important question to query.

Hath thou fed thy pet orangutangally? Nay? Welp, mayhap ye shouldest go n do it before he roars in rage and remorse, then tears up the typewriter writing woefully woefilled words.…[Read more]

@hybridlore

You’re so secretive! What are you hiding? 🤨

Wouldn’t you like to know.

Sadly, I have to jump off now, so I won’t be able to post the next section! I have some stuff I need to get done today.

Maybe I can get it to you this afternoon. Otherwise, you’ll just have to try to get to sleep tonight. lol.

@hybridlore

Oh that would be dark.

hey, I’m the one asking questions. not answering them.

lololol.