Elishavet Elroi

@hybridlore

You’re so secretive! What are you hiding? 🤨

Wouldn’t you like to know.

Sadly, I have to jump off now, so I won’t be able to post the next section! I have some stuff I need to get done today.

Maybe I can get it to you this afternoon. Otherwise, you’ll just have to try to get to sleep tonight. lol.

@hybridlore

Oh that would be dark.

hey, I’m the one asking questions. not answering them.

lololol.

@hybridlore

Maybe.

What do you THINK is going to happen?

If you give me an answer I might give you more!

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

WARNING:

There has been a change in the rapid time jump. It is now a bigger time jump, and Joseph is 19. Sorry about the whiplash any of y’all are experiencing after that. lol.

NEXT SECTION!!

“Joseph, do you think the gates will ever open?”

Asher…

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I finished the magazine!!!

Okay, now to get to work.

@linus-smallprint

I’ll try to send something in as soon as I finish formatting my magazine and get it sent out. I’m almost done!!!!!!

@linus-smallprint

YESSS!!! That’s it!!!

There we go. that’s all you needed.

@whalekeeper

Well, to be honest, I don’t know a lot of pree-teens who like to play dress-up and repeat whatever their sister tells them to say.

The funniest thing is, my most reluctant actor is actually perusing film now that he’s an adult!

@theducktator  @whalekeeper

I don’t know who asked the original question. lol.

I have done several screenwrites. I used to film with my brothers and friends, and we even got one on disk. I still have the stories around her somewhere. Sadly, my biggest two never got filmed because that was the year all my guy actors were done dressing up and…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh.

So I’m not the only one who does this.

Nice.

(Nope, you aren’t allowed to ask which ones they are!!)

lol. Just kidding

I don’t know anymore. I think you should leave it a little “darker”, and it’s good to have lose ends at the end of a story if you plan to go on. I just wasn’t feeling it at this point. I mean, like I…[Read more]

@theducktator  @linus-smallprint

I hope Eric gets captured though.

I felt the same way, except that I don’t know and like him enough to really care if he does.

@linus-smallprint

See, these are the same lines I’m thinking along. I think I’m going to just make him older. The only thing that would hurt would be giving Y’all whiplash after I said he was sixteen. lol.

As for the children and wife thing, I know that Timothy wasn’t married at the time, and he was an elder. (Timothy is kind of my Joseph…[Read more]

Ah the way I gasped😭 that was perfect for what I’ve been planning for Dylan’s character arc 🤭

“…Love?” someone asked.

“Yes, my dear, delectable Dylan.”

And you’re such a good writer girl!! I love reading this!! 🤩

@hybridlore

Idk,

what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?

I’m leaning toward making him older.

I mean, if he’s in the position of spiritual leader, he needs to be mature.

Hybridlore, pick three characters and put them in your signature, and give the rest back. Understand me? (Adrian doesn’t count because he’s dead. so there.)

lololol

@hybridlore

He’s going to try to answer that call for Church leaders that came from the town. The monumental things are how on earth he would even have a chance of getting out of the Capital with the lockdown. The minute he can get out, Joseph and whoever else would be off. So, to have the door open while he’s seventeen would be silly if he…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Um, I want him to be redeemed. lol.

For this I want to see him reacting in shame. If this is a big deal, I need to see it as a big deal.

Like, what is the most shameful or embarrassing thing that ever happened to you? (Don’t actually answer that. lol) Think how it made you feel, and then put yourself in the woods with some…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @hybridlore

Somebody help me!!!!!!! I’m going insane!!!!!!

Okay, not really, but I am stuck and I’m having one of those uninspiring days when words are just black spots on a white screen.

If that makes sense.

Ugh.

Okay, so I am going to do something very monumental in Joseph’s life………… except I’m stuck.

I d…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I normally do that, but this time I forgot. :/

Do you think it is okay to leave him like this, or should I put something else in to temporarily satisfy the reader?

I think we might be sim-understanding one another.

I don’t think Eric was ashamed ENOUGH. Like, the words on the paper said he was ashamed, but he didn’t feel…[Read more]

@hybridlore

You can’t just steal all of them. Otherwise I won’t post anything else. Pic who you want and let the others go.