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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Aaiii! Save us, it’s a film lover!
*Strangled gasp of horror*
Just kidding. I do understand that, and I have heard of some fantastic things they did with the adaptions, including splendid character interactions and even deviations from the books that actually made the plot more family friendly. Like cutting out the barrow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
*applause*
Gentle warriors for the win! I am now inspired to write better representations of gentleness, purpose, and grief. We need unique turns on these topics.
 I think one of the reasons their story is cut is because it’s a story that speaks to more sensitive people. Aragorn looks cool on screen to everyone, and ev…
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic Voice and Diction in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hey y’all! I’ve been thinking about literary voice. I know every writer has a different voice, but what about using voice as a tool to set the scene? Like an extended form of dialogue?
This crazy thought spiral took me while reading some of Shalom Aleichem’s short stories (think Fiddler on the Roof). I was amused by the tongue in cheek humor of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Excactly! It’s so sweet, but not sugary sweet, you know? If it’s not in there, then half her character is left out (the real Eowyn, in fact) It’s a neat turn on illustrating healing and hope that really brings a lot of light into the story. 🙂
I think it’s my second time to read/listen to the Return of the King. I read the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Yes! We just listened to the chapter with him and Eowyn, and I just kept crying and laughing.
*Insert a five page essay on sorrow and love and joy and how they are not mutually exclusive*
*Insert random squeaking noises of happiness*
Yeah… Aragorn/Strider is one of the reasons Faramir is not my only favorite. 😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Aw, thank you! 😁 It’s your favorite? O.O I feel like I was just handed a medal.
The photo quality kinda softened his face, but I still agree. He’s such a fun character. He’s almost as much a walking paradox as Aragorn. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Thank you! I’m glad you like it. 🙂 It was fun to try to draw from my head, although I ended up needing reference pictures for his eyes because he kept looking scared. XD And Faramir should not be scared.
Thank you! Yes, he is described in the book as Westernese: tall, raven-black haired, grey eyed, and noble of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed
Well, it’s been a while since I shared any art, but the recent LotR discussions inspired to try my hand at one of the few characters I pictured vividly.
Meet the Ranger Faramir as I met him. (Although the photo quality is bad. Sorry.)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 2 weeks ago
That’s a perfect illustration of their relationship. XD
You draw horses so well! I lost my courage for horses a while ago. They’re so big! XD Anyway, Tug is beautiful.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I know!!! And it doesn’t make any sense why not, unless they just wanted to emphasize a smaller circle of awesome characters.
And if they wanted a sweet, visible romance, Faramir and Eowyn are so incredibly perfect. We just listened to that part last night and I was half laughing half crying. But maybe it’s a mercy because they…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 3 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m running.
Running.
I can’t think now.
The world spins around me.
I run.
Is it behind me or in front? Am I running away for going home? Breath clawing in and out, tearing at my throat. One foot before the other and the earth slides away. Sliding, blurring. Away.
Feet too fast. I’m flying now. It hits me.
I fell. See stars, black and white…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 3 weeks ago
Also….
Leon is oddly like Samwise.(Or at least, last I knew of him he was.) While their plotlines are pretty completely different, they have similar strength and weaknesses. Both react in anger when those love are threatened, and both struggle with hopelessness, unbelief, and selfishness. The difference is in direction. Leon lets his hurt and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh, funsies!
This is a great idea! XD Unfortunately, your characters are actually pretty unique, so finding a match here will take a bit.
Faramir and Beregond! My sister and I have been re-read/listening to the trilogy again and I had forgotten how much I liked Beregond. Ever noticed the illustration of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 3 weeks ago
IT’S WILL.
And Shadow! And the infamous mandola!
He actually looks a lot like I imagine him. Wow. That’s very good.
Yeah, I haven’t finished the series either. Mostly because he killed my favorite character in the end and it didn’t even make sense. He should have just let her be and maybe taken the chance to write a healthy…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 4 weeks ago
Glad you like it! We shall try to post the next bit next week. 🙂
If anyone has any ideas, they can post them in this thread too. I think it’s unofficially dedicated to Kingdom Pen.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 4 weeks ago
I understand that. My sister and I found a folder full of old short stories from several years ago. My writing has come a long, long way, but at the same time I still have similar tendencies and character ideas.
I even illustrated the little things. XD I don’t do that now, but I intend to.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 4 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Finally got them in. ☝️ I found some typos last minute.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 4 weeks ago
Prologue
The evening light was fading in my ‘office’. I pushed my makeshift desk (the coffee table)aside to click on a stand lamp. Its buttery yellow light softened the harsh blue of my computer. I ran my fingers over the keys again.
Where was Travenor? Ah yes. My dauntless hero had just stopped by the Emin Muil.
A slight stab of guilt dug int…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 4 weeks ago
Anyone wonder what would really happen if your characters were real and you met? Or what if tables turned and you were a character instead of the author?
Then this serial story might just be the sparkle of insanity you have been hoping for! (or if not, and if that’s the case, go invest in Narnian ice cream or something.)
Anyway, here’s the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Children’s Fiction in the forum Genre-Writing 4 months ago
There is good and bad to be said about the books. There are some stupendous characters, including a young Sherlock and his intrepid little sister. Often the plots are unique and full of twists, and the stories include tidbits of fascinating history like the Victorian Fan language knife fighting techniques.
Unfortunately, many of…[Read more]
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Sounds like life lol, nice poem
Yeah, life can be rough sometimes. This year has felt like Micah 7:8 in more ways than one. XD I think this poem was kinda trauma processing for an accident I had a few months back. Glad you like it!
Oh, that’s a good bible verse. Sorry to hear about your accident! Are you ok now?
Eeek, I forgot the phone died before I sent in my response. Now it’s very late, but anyhoo,
I’m doing well. Basically, I met concrete and it was not polite. Thank the Lord, the only real injury was a broken bone in my hand. It’s almost normal now. 🙂