@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Oh boy. Ok, this will be fun.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
YesYesYesYesYes!
My sister and I reverted to eleven year-olds the moment we found out. The amount of happy dances since then has been Citadel of Dreams worthy.
We have effectively spread the Natalian infection to multiple people in our church, and hopefully this next book will bring more loyalties. I feel like a Seventh Districter.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Yay! Congratulations, @ellette-giselle !
This has been so much fun. If we do it again, count me in!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
That’s so much fun!
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Elishavet Elroi posted a new activity comment 2 months, 1 week ago
Eeek, I forgot the phone died before I sent in my response. Now it’s very late, but anyhoo,
I’m doing well. Basically, I met concrete and it was not polite. Thank the Lord, the only real injury was a broken bone in my hand. It’s almost normal now. 🙂 -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Hobbe’s best friend!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Yay! Whenever I put symbolism in a story I end up awkwardly trying to figure out if people caught it without giving it away. For further clarification, look up the two flowers mentioned.
And we definitely need more fabulous books for young people!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
That sounds like a lot of fun! It’s a theme both Middle Grade and YA could need, so you can absolutely write it for both. I’m technically a young adult and I like animal stories.
And yes, Yigal was military. There’s a lot of flower/name symbolism in the story… did you catch it?
In the words of Calvin, that was STUPENDOUS.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Oof, that’s ok. 🙂 Hope you feel better soon!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
I’m so glad you liked it!
Yeah, it’s standalone right now, but who knows? 😉 I haven’t gotten to work seriously in much of my WIPs, so they’re more like Works Waiting For Progress or something like that.
A sub-series is a good idea! I shall await your return. =D And maybe get some of my homework done. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
My stories? Yes. This short story is a stand alone, but I have three WIPs. Currently, my goal is to finish a novela by Easter. It’s one I haven’t shared much about, but is pretty close to my heart. Plus it’s a better springboard than a 3 volume epic or a 5 book series. XD
You?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
*Squeals*
Yay! Like I said, it’s such an intricately pieced world.
Yeah, most of mine are in my head too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Exactly! =)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Oh, I liked your story. The worldbuilding and premise was so unique! And the frame story layout was a good touch. Does it belong to a larger story?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Very true. It’s so much fun. XD I would add that we hope if we can connect to a reader’s heart, we can impact them in the long run.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Aw, thanks! (Why is it so fulfilling to hear your writing made someone cry? XD)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Oh, interesting! I love the Celtic folklore inspiration. Fairies are so creepy. XD It’s a fascinating premise.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Here it is in all it’s ESL by a native English speaker glory.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v4ZJMMpmLEv0rVVsb7mpQG6OI0Xt1XpeWYZU5_934nc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Yay! I’ll run over mine to get some edits my siblings suggested done and send it in after that.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
lol. Thanks. I should read the entirety of a post thread before joining in. XD
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