@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Voice and Diction in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Ah yes! I have not read manga, but I love seeing different characters’ points of view on the same or similar event. (One reason I like The Last Archer. The antagonist-to-friend plot looks completely different when seen through the eyes of the antagonist’s lacky. Not to mention being incredibly hilarious.)
Hmm.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Oh my. XD He would make an interesting centaur. I like it.
*applause*
Rereading Narnia is the ultimate cure for boredom.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Thanks! 🙂 It was fun to draw.
I can see how someone would feel that way. I’ve never had trouble keeping my mental images separate from movies. It must depend on the person lol.
That would be nice. XD It’s annoying to have different versions of characters competing for attention. I can usually keep them s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Here it is!
In which Aenwest gets lost inside her head, and dwarves need manners
Chapter 2
Travenor walked quickly. I scurried through the woods behind him, feeling remarkably like a squirrel trailing an elk. Sunlight streamed down through the leaves around me, creating a world of green and gold. Birds sang above us…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Aaiii! Save us, it’s a film lover!
*Strangled gasp of horror*
Just kidding. I do understand that, and I have heard of some fantastic things they did with the adaptions, including splendid character interactions and even deviations from the books that actually made the plot more family friendly. Like cutting out the barrow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
*applause*
Gentle warriors for the win! I am now inspired to write better representations of gentleness, purpose, and grief. We need unique turns on these topics.
 I think one of the reasons their story is cut is because it’s a story that speaks to more sensitive people. Aragorn looks cool on screen to everyone, and ev…
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic Voice and Diction in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Hey y’all! I’ve been thinking about literary voice. I know every writer has a different voice, but what about using voice as a tool to set the scene? Like an extended form of dialogue?
This crazy thought spiral took me while reading some of Shalom Aleichem’s short stories (think Fiddler on the Roof). I was amused by the tongue in cheek humor of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Excactly! It’s so sweet, but not sugary sweet, you know? If it’s not in there, then half her character is left out (the real Eowyn, in fact) It’s a neat turn on illustrating healing and hope that really brings a lot of light into the story. 🙂
I think it’s my second time to read/listen to the Return of the King. I read the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Yes! We just listened to the chapter with him and Eowyn, and I just kept crying and laughing.
*Insert a five page essay on sorrow and love and joy and how they are not mutually exclusive*
*Insert random squeaking noises of happiness*
Yeah… Aragorn/Strider is one of the reasons Faramir is not my only favorite. 😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Aw, thank you! 😁 It’s your favorite? O.O I feel like I was just handed a medal.
The photo quality kinda softened his face, but I still agree. He’s such a fun character. He’s almost as much a walking paradox as Aragorn. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
Thank you! I’m glad you like it. 🙂 It was fun to try to draw from my head, although I ended up needing reference pictures for his eyes because he kept looking scared. XD And Faramir should not be scared.
Thank you! Yes, he is described in the book as Westernese: tall, raven-black haired, grey eyed, and noble of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed
Well, it’s been a while since I shared any art, but the recent LotR discussions inspired to try my hand at one of the few characters I pictured vividly.
Meet the Ranger Faramir as I met him. (Although the photo quality is bad. Sorry.)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months ago
That’s a perfect illustration of their relationship. XD
You draw horses so well! I lost my courage for horses a while ago. They’re so big! XD Anyway, Tug is beautiful.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
I know!!! And it doesn’t make any sense why not, unless they just wanted to emphasize a smaller circle of awesome characters.
And if they wanted a sweet, visible romance, Faramir and Eowyn are so incredibly perfect. We just listened to that part last night and I was half laughing half crying. But maybe it’s a mercy because they…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 3 months ago
I’m running.
Running.
I can’t think now.
The world spins around me.
I run.
Is it behind me or in front? Am I running away for going home? Breath clawing in and out, tearing at my throat. One foot before the other and the earth slides away. Sliding, blurring. Away.
Feet too fast. I’m flying now. It hits me.
I fell. See stars, black and white…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Also….
Leon is oddly like Samwise.(Or at least, last I knew of him he was.) While their plotlines are pretty completely different, they have similar strength and weaknesses. Both react in anger when those love are threatened, and both struggle with hopelessness, unbelief, and selfishness. The difference is in direction. Leon lets his hurt and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Oh, funsies!
This is a great idea! XD Unfortunately, your characters are actually pretty unique, so finding a match here will take a bit.
Faramir and Beregond! My sister and I have been re-read/listening to the trilogy again and I had forgotten how much I liked Beregond. Ever noticed the illustration of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 months, 1 week ago
IT’S WILL.
And Shadow! And the infamous mandola!
He actually looks a lot like I imagine him. Wow. That’s very good.
Yeah, I haven’t finished the series either. Mostly because he killed my favorite character in the end and it didn’t even make sense. He should have just let her be and maybe taken the chance to write a healthy…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Glad you like it! We shall try to post the next bit next week. 🙂
If anyone has any ideas, they can post them in this thread too. I think it’s unofficially dedicated to Kingdom Pen.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
I understand that. My sister and I found a folder full of old short stories from several years ago. My writing has come a long, long way, but at the same time I still have similar tendencies and character ideas.
I even illustrated the little things. XD I don’t do that now, but I intend to.
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Sounds like life lol, nice poem
Yeah, life can be rough sometimes. This year has felt like Micah 7:8 in more ways than one. XD I think this poem was kinda trauma processing for an accident I had a few months back. Glad you like it!
Oh, that’s a good bible verse. Sorry to hear about your accident! Are you ok now?
Eeek, I forgot the phone died before I sent in my response. Now it’s very late, but anyhoo,
I’m doing well. Basically, I met concrete and it was not polite. Thank the Lord, the only real injury was a broken bone in my hand. It’s almost normal now. 🙂