@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months ago
Also, there’s a difference between the Chosen One trope and a For Such a Time mentality. I would love to see the true value of humanity, of the reader, addressed. That we are made with purpose and by intention. There is hope. God doesn’t waste His time making and loving children just to destroy them in Hell. This is why we cannot decide to be a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months ago
-What did/do you enjoy about your favorite MG novels?
Humor. Slapstick sparingly and good wit whenever it’s needed.
I liked characters I could connect to (although considering my personality, I could empathize easily) I liked it when the suffering was real. Kids can be done of the most melodramatic people on the planet, but like Koshka said,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
That’s perfect! I love it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
In Which Trees are Dangerous, and Aenwest Considers Doubles
Chapter 7
The closer we got to the Dell, the more tangled the trees became. It should have been much like the woods around Multnomah Falls, WA, but years ago, as I told Dwogin when he tripped over an exposed root, the Rangers had planted saplings between the older trees and woven them…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @hybridlore @theducktator @anyoneinterested
Some days we kinda forget,
Some WIPS will never go on.
Gotta get the rest of it done,
All the way to the Silver Star.
(Far away, through writer’s block so bold.)
*cough cough*
Although it’s been neglected, it has not been abandoned. We have another chapter!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Like the others said, that depends on your characters. (They had some great advice.)
I think it would also depend on how expected/tragic the death was. While doesn’t necessarily lessen grief, it makes a lot of difference in how one processes it. (I think. Not an expert.) In some ways it would be worse, especially if they were…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I am interested! April will be really busy, but if I can join, I’ll tell you. Whatever we do, I should be able to join on Saturday mornings or early Friday afternoons.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Squirrelies! I love the fluffies. They are very intelligent. Unimaginative people completely discredit them. I think some of your rogue squirrels are running a gang in our town. XD The initiation rites include darting between the wheels of a car.
(@rae You definitely tagged the right people. 🙂 )
As for feedback, the idea is…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What are your most influential childhood books? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 months ago
Most influential so the ones I still remember. XD That simplifies things.
I grew up listening to the Focus on the Family Radio Theater rendition of the Chronicles of Narnia, and read the books when I was about 9-ish. They really shaped my love for story, and even how I viewed God. They’re a story that grows with you as you grow…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
oh nar!!! *chews lip*
I was so nervous reading that. XD Things are not looking good for November or Ara.
I think my heart literally stopped when Callan showed up. I had to escape the forum for a moment before coming back to finish reading it. XD *shudders* Once more, fantastic villains. I loathe their guts.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Poor Hugo! Save him, Marcel!
Probably a good thing you moved Viktor on. I think he’d either die from shock, or by attacking the thing with his pocket knife. As it is, he’d feel terrible for leaving Hugo in that situation, but it’s for the best. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
Wowsers. That’s a lot! Sounds fascinating, though.
I’ll try to find that article… I think it was in Jstor…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
AHHHH! It’s perfect! I love it.
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Elishavet Elroi posted a new activity comment 2 months, 1 week ago
Thank you for the heads up!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
That’s an adorable idea! I’d say to go for it.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Yay! I was enjoying TPE. (says the person who hasn’t really commented on that thread. Sorry.)
The song list is very comprehensive. I am in mild awe. I’ll have to listen in on it a bit.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Oo. I’ll have to look at those.
Right now I’m listening to my happy music. XD Which today, is apparently Slava Lui (by Alin Si Emima) and Hineh Ma Tov (by James Wilson). lol.
If I made a playlist describing myself, it would be so convoluted.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 months, 2 weeks ago
lol.
*takes a cupcake*
*thinks*
Ok. The problem with Bubble Wrap is that it’s kinda single time use. Two or three good hits in a fight and several spots will be very thin. A good gambeson would basically be multi-use bubble wrap. The popping sound could be fun though.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I’d have to look again, but while studying for an essay a year ago, I did find some documentation/studies on children displaced by the Blitz, if that would be helpful.
It’s the reason Viktor now spends part of his child nonverbal, and reenacts a lot of stuff in his play for about a year. (Throws his sister’s doll into the kitchen…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Soccer is fun. I always understood kickball more, but I have a friend who was a goalie for years. It’s very much a thing in Hispanic culture, so we see a lot of it.
I’m personally not super sporty. I live in college football country, but it’s possibly my least favorite sport. I like badminton though, and pingpong, and kinda…[Read more]
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