Elishavet Elroi

@not-so-secret-secret-assassin

I understand if the series isn’t for you. We were actually very sceptical of it at first, especially of the fangs. I also see where the first book could be cliche or slow. He uses many plot points we are all too familiar with, and there are a few things that are a bit unrealistic. Then, why do I like them? Well,…[Read more]

@e-p-writes

That’s beautiful.

@godlyfantasy12

This is a brilliant idea!

So…we can share encouraging things? Hmm.

Isaiah 42:16 “And I will bring the blind by a way that they knew not; I will lead them in paths that they have not known: I will make darkness light before them, and crooked things strait. These things will I do unto them, and…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh, it’s fine! I was just checking. (Docs was acting up.)

No, it’s plotting mutiny.

@keilah-h

Is it letting you comment? I’m asking this because for a moment it said there were several comments, but then it changed its mind. I’m just checking to make sure it’s not plotting mutiny.

@keilah-h

I think that’s The End. We had imagined much more, but it’s hard to write it all and keep it meaningful.

@keilah-h

There it is!(in above post) We would also appreciate any comments/suggestions since we’re still smoothing it out.

1. here!

@keilah-h

Of course, I’d be thrilled to! I’d stick the link on here if I can figure out how. It’s bon Google docs.

@devastate-lasting

Ok! (Compared to some…not very. Yet others? Hmm.)

How long have you been at it?

@devastate-lasting

Yay! I am as well. 😉

@devastate-lasting

*Freezes and starts counting on fingers*

Uh, about two years? I think I started seriously writing sometime in 2019. (Or was that early 2020?) So, yeah, not long.

@devastate-lasting

Not my first to start, but yes. Other than the three other WIPs and a smattering of short stories, it’s my current work.

How about you? Have you finished anything?

@anatra23

The movie they were gathering funds for and had a fantastic add for? I don’t know: I haven’t heard anything positive or negative.

I think those are the themes, but then again, I’m still in the first chapter.

*Sighs heavily*

It’s so annoying, I have an idea about where the story will go, but I have difficulty getting it out/started. It doesn’t help that my characters aren’t, well, verbal yet.

Enough of my grumblings, this will be entertaining to watch play out.

@devastate-lasting

I think themes for Eirtan are Selfless Servanthood, The Power Of Truth, God’s Strength in Our Weakness, Identity, and Mantles/Passing of Burdens.

Yeah, it’s still in the building stage.

XD I know, right? Why do we have to do school anyway? XD

So, here’s the biggest reason I’m confused over my character’s and their roles (in Eirtan, at least) Victor wasn’t originally the eldest sibling, nor the was he the MC; Alyona was. After a few day’s thought on the subject, though, I realized Victor needed to be the main character…and he…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

I’m trying to solidify my main characters.

Victor/Amichai: needs a better character arc, lie, and, well, I’m still not sure if he’s my MC.

Alyona: needs a purpose. WHO IS SHE SUPPOSED TO BE?

Reuben: does he die or not? Why does he die if he does?

Aethelthryth: needs a struggle, purpose, a calling. I’m still trying to work…[Read more]