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Jaybird posted an update 1 year, 12 months ago
I’m running.
Running.
I can’t think now.
The world spins around me.
I run.
Is it behind me or in front? Am I running away for going home? Breath clawing in and out, tearing at my throat. One foot before the other and the earth slides away. Sliding, blurring. Away.
Feet too fast. I’m flying now. It hits me.
I fell. See stars, black and white…[Read more] -
Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Also….
Leon is oddly like Samwise.(Or at least, last I knew of him he was.) While their plotlines are pretty completely different, they have similar strength and weaknesses. Both react in anger when those love are threatened, and both struggle with hopelessness, unbelief, and selfishness. The difference is in direction. Leon lets his hurt and…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Oh, funsies!
This is a great idea! XD Unfortunately, your characters are actually pretty unique, so finding a match here will take a bit.
Faramir and Beregond! My sister and I have been re-read/listening to the trilogy again and I had forgotten how much I liked Beregond. Ever noticed the illustration of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
IT’S WILL.
And Shadow! And the infamous mandola!
He actually looks a lot like I imagine him. Wow. That’s very good.
Yeah, I haven’t finished the series either. Mostly because he killed my favorite character in the end and it didn’t even make sense. He should have just let her be and maybe taken the chance to write a healthy…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Glad you like it! We shall try to post the next bit next week. 🙂
If anyone has any ideas, they can post them in this thread too. I think it’s unofficially dedicated to Kingdom Pen.
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I understand that. My sister and I found a folder full of old short stories from several years ago. My writing has come a long, long way, but at the same time I still have similar tendencies and character ideas.
I even illustrated the little things. XD I don’t do that now, but I intend to.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle Finally got them in. ☝️ I found some typos last minute.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Prologue
The evening light was fading in my ‘office’. I pushed my makeshift desk (the coffee table)aside to click on a stand lamp. Its buttery yellow light softened the harsh blue of my computer. I ran my fingers over the keys again.
Where was Travenor? Ah yes. My dauntless hero had just stopped by the Emin Muil.
A slight stab of guilt dug int…[Read more]
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Jaybird started the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Anyone wonder what would really happen if your characters were real and you met? Or what if tables turned and you were a character instead of the author?
Then this serial story might just be the sparkle of insanity you have been hoping for! (or if not, and if that’s the case, go invest in Narnian ice cream or something.)
Anyway, here’s the…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Children’s Fiction in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years ago
There is good and bad to be said about the books. There are some stupendous characters, including a young Sherlock and his intrepid little sister. Often the plots are unique and full of twists, and the stories include tidbits of fascinating history like the Victorian Fan language knife fighting techniques.
Unfortunately, many of…[Read more]
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Jaybird's profile was updated 2 years ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Children’s Fiction in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years ago
Ironically, most books that impact me now, are those that impacted me then. We read and enjoyed many books that I no longer remember because they went back to the library and apparently their impact ended there.
Long List of Books/Authors! Skip at will: Saundra Boynton; Little Women; American Girl series and Mysteries; Nancy Drew; The Trumpet of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Children’s Fiction in the forum Genre-Writing 2 years ago
Hey @esther-c !
Children’s literature is a precious genre!
Let’s see if I can figure out some answers from my own experience as a very young bookworm and aspiring writer of a children’s novel.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 1 month ago
HEY Y’ALL!Â
I shared a doc on the third page that’s a continuation my sister and I wrote of the epilogue. We do not mind sharing it with y’all, but as it is possible to see the different emails connected to it once acces is granted, I’m asking if y’all would please tag us in this thread when you send us a request. Otherwise, to protect you and…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
Loads of fun! There are so many possibilities! XD
My parents were a little concerned though.
Well, my art style for this story is fairly simple. I’m hoping to mix in some ink work, but so far it’s just line drawing with simple shading. The one picture I tried with his burns, I ended up mostly hiding it.

I’ll be somewhere in the…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
So I’ve been thinking…
Do y’all have any tips for drawing scars/disfigurements? 😁
I really love the fact that Viktor has serious burn scarring on his hands and back, but it’s been difficult to draw. Part of my problem is that I’m not sure that my drawings look like burn scars at all. The other part is trying to find the balance between…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 1 month ago
It’s Faramir!!!!!!!!!
That’s so good! Did you use alcohol markers for the color? The coloring and detail is beautiful. And his outfit is definitely Ranger-ish. It’s perfect for him. Especially the bow. (I actually do have a cloak like that…)
He’s one of my absolute favorites from LotR. A battle hardened soldier with a g…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
You felt like Calvin? I didn’t know my pouncing abilities were so good. I feel profoundly complemented. XD
Aw, thank you! I’m so glad you like my drawings, and that you don’t think the dress and skirt thing is stupid. Sometimes it gets a little lonely.
SKIRTS ARE THE BEST. XD I don’t know your personal reasons behind them, but…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 2 months ago
Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!
I know this is an exceptionally late ambush, but when you asked what we did on here other than ambush newbies, I realized this is one thing I haven’t done in a while. And as you love Peter Pevensie (from the BOOKS), and Smalden, draw beautifully, and like skirts, I feel an unavoidable obligation to…[Read more]
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Sounds like life lol, nice poem
Yeah, life can be rough sometimes. This year has felt like Micah 7:8 in more ways than one. XD I think this poem was kinda trauma processing for an accident I had a few months back. Glad you like it!
Oh, that’s a good bible verse. Sorry to hear about your accident! Are you ok now?
Eeek, I forgot the phone died before I sent in my response. Now it’s very late, but anyhoo,
I’m doing well. Basically, I met concrete and it was not polite. Thank the Lord, the only real injury was a broken bone in my hand. It’s almost normal now. 🙂
Girl that was beautiful
*totally NOT stalking you*
Thanks! XD