@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Hiiiiii! Good to have you back!!!
I’m so excited about this, it’s borderline absurd.😂
Alyona
The door flew open, admitting a boy, a gir who darted in front of him with a furry thing that weilded three tails and a twitching nose.
None of them Dorwains.
Alyona didn’t know what to do with such company. She…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
*Squeal of anticipation*
Okay, let’s see…
Alyona
The day had gone, and with it went the rest of he weary kitchen workers, all except for one small lass bent over a pot of stew.
Alyona absentmindedly lifted the lid and stirred it again. It was bubbling merrily away, sending up tiny whiffs of stewed grain. She…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Here’s another collage for Eirtan….
This one’s for all three siblings.
Thanks! *Darts glance at mine. Quickly kicks a stay idea back into it. * Yeah, it’s awful. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Definitely. XD ah, November.
*Pauses and checks*
Congratulations!!!
*Tosses some more confetti*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
XD poor girl. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @emilysf
So, here’s attempt number one for Alyona!
..and I hope it’s not out of order.
Alyona
Alyona tossed a handful of water into the dough and began to knead. It was awkward for her, bending over a raised trough like this instead of working on a board on the ground, but she tried not to show it.
If that guard…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I think it’ll be Alyona. 😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Winifrith is fairly sensitive, with a heart for the hurting (she’d be finding something to treat Sofia’s scrapes on sight.). She struggles with communication though, and often feels alone. Oh, and loads of fear and uncertainty. However, she is a lot stronger than she thinks she is, especially when she learns to rely on The One Who Never Fails.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ok, I will.
*Mischievous cackling*
I do kinda want it to be Alyona, I just can’t make up my mind.
They are on good terms. Alyona is a bit of the “take me with you wherever you go, I’m with you to the end” sister, and fiercely loyal to her brother in a quiet and often unnoticed way.
Oh, and she might be a tiny bit competitive…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Ok, this is hilarious!
What does everyone think of my adding another character? (I know, that might make our already jumbled narratives even harder.)
She would be in the Buteries kneading bread, and she’d either be a 15 year old lass named Winifrith(from my other series), or Viktor’s 12(about) year old sister A…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
By the way, Viktor’s hair color is dark brown, soon to be black.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh, and you happened to ask about almost the first thing I came up with when I had the idea for this story. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
It sounds a lot more in-depth than it probably is. 😏 I have lot more to go.
My ways?
A lot of mindless wonderings. And wanderings.
And spending a bit too much time in random history. I like gathering bits and pieces of real cultures and smashing them together. (And stealing ideas from other books.)
And talking it out to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh! Sorry, you haven’t been there. 😉
I’ll try to explain.
There are three nations. No, make that four…
Let’s start at the beginning, shall we?
*Opens ancient scroll*
No, not that far back.
*Picks up a different one instead*
Wait, you just wanted to know what a Yartassite was, not the whole history of the Brother-Nations.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Great idea! Yes, he is a high commander in the, ahem, “Eirtanian” army. *Eye roll*
It’s mostly Dorwainian. Of course. No Eirtanian loyal to the Brother-Nations would be at all willing to be in his army.
Which is actually even better, taking Viktor into the situation.
Viktor doesn’t like Dorwainian soldiers, and for good…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
Thanks! And yeah, it aught to be. It’s actually from a conversation I have in my book.
Even though I haven’t gotten there yet… XD
Oh, those are great too!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12
Augh! You did so well correlating the colors!And now I want to share something, so…
That was a collage of mine for Viktor’s sister, Alyona.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 9 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Yes indeed, poor, dear Viktor.
I don’t know either. I really want to see Kilied’s response…
It’s okay, I mean, Viktor doesn’t mind too much. Not for now.
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