@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
Aw… it’s Leon. ❤️ I’m so happy find he’s stealing your heart again. I am concerned about this “broken it” comment, lol.
I really like the picture of him cooking with his daughter. It says a lot about him as a person and their situation. And the quotes are perfection.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Very nice! Although I have not watched the movies (I saw part of the first one?) I can definitely apply all you said to the books. Including writing stories more like Narnia instead.
*chokes on snow*
Yay! Onnendel is becoming my favorite of the cast. XD
Oh. Ick.
I should have seen that coming. That’s ugly. Wow. *…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I would like to inform those who may be concerned for my sanity.
I have a brother.
On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose. 😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Beahahaha!?!!?! Squigaldy Squagaldy spiggals!!!!!!!¡¡¡
TBM
PWR
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Stupendous points! Those are things I’ve thought about with a shudder. Some of our soldiers captured in Afghanistan were women. In one situation, she was the only one to survive because the medical staff of the place didn’t want to see her die.
Our Marine grandfather told my mother that she’d enlist “over his dead body.” Meanwhile, a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.
If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎
Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.
Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!
You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.
One thing that caught me:
Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I’m glad it’s a good one. I’ve imagined telling it to little kids at reenactments (Which is to say, I’ve imagined being in reenactments).
Crater Base sounds interesting! Sibling built stories are the best.
You know, we played some elaborate games with our dolls, Littlest Petshops, and LEGOs, but I think our stuffed animals were the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper
I wrote a happy scene and a rather sad scene. However, the happy scene would makes very little sense to anyone reading the story, so I’m sharing the sad one. XD
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There was too much silence in his room. Onnendel pushed himself up on his elbow to see over the mound of pillows. The sunlight that splashed across…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
@whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed
I’ll take care of my 20 snowballs later, but I think I can get y’all’s two dusted off.
That is, if you want some backstory set up for our serial story that’s currently on pause. 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Wellllllllllllllllllllllllll…. XD
There was this truce thing going on.
I still have 10 snowballs available. I am saving them for instant defense against an attack.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Oh! I like them. The first is very lonesome/dreamy, and the second does well painting its picture.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Glad you like it! 😀
*ducks into fort*
*is defending herself with her arsenal of ten snowballs*
*and a golden tin of cookies*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Hmmmmm.
Ok. I’m seeing a child soldier type. He’s got a past and he doesn’t care what he does because he doesn’t want to care. Yet he also feels he still has something to accomplish. He could be redeemable, or he could be an incredible thorn in the MC’s side. As for who he is… I don’t know. I think he was once connected to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
Thank you! It’s for my new WIP. (Which you probably already know. XD)
I like yours. His character is always interesting to see illustrated visually. The contrast of tender love for his children and the dark realities of his past right next to each other is incredible. ❤️ And the quites add hope. ☺️
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
That’s… Really bittersweet. It feels very much like it’s inside a person’s head. As the child who grew up going to nursing homes, I like it. The end makes it sweet.
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