@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hey, I love to write in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Greeting and welcome to KP! I’m called Elishavet around here, and I write mostly medieval fantasy (no magic), with an emphasis on allegory.
I also wrote poetry, children’s Church material, and if I’m in the mood (okay, if I am assigned to) essays.
I have been writing for, *counts on fingers*, three years? I honestly don’t know. It…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Alyona
This wasn’t going right. Hopefully it wouldn’t go wrong either.
They had been forced to follow Jocelyn inside, from one threat to another. If only she could know for certain if the two VoyageFolk were Smugglers or not, then she wouldn’t be so uncertain.
At least Viktor was safely with her, however safe that may…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
*Wriggle of excitement*
Viktor
There in the doorway stood a girl around his age, a wide smile illuminating her face.
Alyona had instinctively clutched at his hand when the door had opened, and he couldn’t help but notice how clammy her own hand was. What had frightened her this badly? The stranger seemed friendly…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
……..and I’m back!!! (Sorry, my phone was hijacked by a sibling, which is fine ’cause I’ll probably do the same to hers some time. The problem with having books on one’s phone. XD)
Alyona
An eternity passed before someone spoke up. Well, maybe not quite an eternity, but to Alyona’s anxious mind, it was undeniably…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Alyona
November made a face and Arabella gave him a small smile.
‘What did I say?’
“Ah, I think we’ll take water,” Arabella said demurely. Alyona filled her pitcher and filled three cups, keeping her eyes properly downcast.
“Though…I suppose Zlatan and Vulkasin are old enough for wine…”
Old enough for wine? Al…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sure! Do whatever your characters need. 😉
I think one of the rules for this was that your characters could leave whenever.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Okay! 😉 We’ll see what we can do…
Alyona
The stew was quickly divided up among the group. Thankfully, there seemed to be enough for everyone.
Which meant there would be none to fill a bottle for the journey.
Oh well, bread kept better anyway.
She settled in on a stool beside the fireplace, just where a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Alyona
The group seemed to relax a bit, their surprise turning to… Many different reactions ranging from delight to something like anger. Maybe concern? She couldn’t tell.
BubblyNoiseGirl was on the delighted side. “Well! Hello there!” She grinned at Alyona with an unfazed open friendliness. “Thanks for sha…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Oh! I’ll try to oblige.
Alyona is about eleven, but nearly twelve. However, because of the same reasons that Viktor believes he’s thirteen, they think she’s twelve already.
She has strait-ish dark brown hair that almost falls to her knees when loosed but it’s usually in a braid(yes, it’s uncut). Olive complexion…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
To explain my over vague comment. 😉
The sea in which Yartass sits is inhabited by a navigating people called the VoyageFolk. They’ve spent so much time on the water, that they don’t see the attraction to living on land. XD (which will cause some humorous conversations later in the book when they make friends with some. We can…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
It’s hilarious how we both have similar cultures within contact of our characters.
Just as long as Alyona doesn’t ask about boats. XD
She’ll probably soon get suspicious though, especially since they are so at home on land. Lol!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Hiiiiii! Good to have you back!!!
I’m so excited about this, it’s borderline absurd.😂
Alyona
The door flew open, admitting a boy, a gir who darted in front of him with a furry thing that weilded three tails and a twitching nose.
None of them Dorwains.
Alyona didn’t know what to do with such company. She…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
*Squeal of anticipation*
Okay, let’s see…
Alyona
The day had gone, and with it went the rest of he weary kitchen workers, all except for one small lass bent over a pot of stew.
Alyona absentmindedly lifted the lid and stirred it again. It was bubbling merrily away, sending up tiny whiffs of stewed grain. She…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
Here’s another collage for Eirtan….
This one’s for all three siblings.
Thanks! *Darts glance at mine. Quickly kicks a stay idea back into it. * Yeah, it’s awful. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Definitely. XD ah, November.
*Pauses and checks*
Congratulations!!!
*Tosses some more confetti*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
XD poor girl. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @emilysf
So, here’s attempt number one for Alyona!
..and I hope it’s not out of order.
Alyona
Alyona tossed a handful of water into the dough and began to knead. It was awkward for her, bending over a raised trough like this instead of working on a board on the ground, but she tried not to show it.
If that guard…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I think it’ll be Alyona. 😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Winifrith is fairly sensitive, with a heart for the hurting (she’d be finding something to treat Sofia’s scrapes on sight.). She struggles with communication though, and often feels alone. Oh, and loads of fear and uncertainty. However, she is a lot stronger than she thinks she is, especially when she learns to rely on The One Who Never Fails.
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