Elishavet Elroi

@freedomwriter76

Yayyy!!!!!!!! I’m so glad!

And also, just to clear things up, the lines

This day is life come where only death has dwelled. Rise up servant, warrior reborn. Rise up child, son of the Highest King.

Were supposed to be in italics, because that’s the King speaking.

@joy-caroline @freedomwriter76 (RIKER!!!) @godlyfantasy12 (Thank you! It means a lot to know you find it so. 🙂 ) @koshka

So, I promised a while back that I’d share this scene, but I had a lot left undone in it at the time. Now, while it’s still extremely rough and subject to change depending on how the story falls out, it is complete.

So, here…[Read more]

@joy-caroline.  @koshka. @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy1

So, y’all, I need some thoughts on this scene in my rough draft. Does it make sense? Do I say too much or too little? It’s rough draft, so not my best writing, but I really need some thoughts on it.

(And I still need to plot and pray over Lennet, Alwin’s mother. I’m not quite sure about…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ahhh, I love all the scenes you shared!

(Even though I am a touch mad at the cliffhanger. 😉 )

November is so sweet and perfectly awkward. I sympathize very much. XD and Ara…. Oh Ara.

And yes, Riven is dooming himself to major rewards…. But definitely not the nice kind!

And I think Ganesh us becoming a favorite character…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka

Viktor

Viktor walked silently behind Leon and Riker, his mind swimming through the pain around him.

Leon was stumbling forward like he hadn’t eaten for weeks, apparently drunk with grief. (Not that he’s actually intoxicated. I just realized how literal that is in his story, but I wasn’t meaning…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

@keilah-h @koshka

Y’ALL, I AM BACK!!!!

Okay, so due to a large spiral of events, I lost a bunch of stuff, including my password to KP. But since @kathleenramm and the KP staff are so awesome, I am back!!! (Thank you!!!)

I’m literaly soooo excited, and feel very blessed to be on here.

Now, I’ll try to get some…[Read more]

And last of all, my dear, darling. My favorite little shepherd boy, my…

OK, it’s obvious who this one belongs to.

Reúven Elroi (Robert Shepherds)

Dark headed and dark eyed, Reúven is not only from Eirda, he looks the part. He was torn away from his home and remaining family and sent to the Institutions like a hundred other boys. The sorrow o…[Read more]

AND THE THIRD ONE! (I’m having too much fun.)

This one is from our brain dump world, so it’s where we put all our creative overload before it spills into our WIPs and completely changes them. lol! Still, the more we get aquainted with this character, the more we like him.

Inglor Avelorion (Aka Ethan Llorel)

The only son of the WodeAlven in the…[Read more]

And next up, is…

Wilkins O’Laith (William Owens)

Gentle and quiet-spoken, he is an only son as the second born in a family of five children. He hails from the fens and wet-woodlands of the Tais, and struggles to learn the language here, finding it much less heartfelt than his mother-tongue. This is but his first year in the Institution.

His…[Read more]

There are four MCs, four POVs. (and I’m laughing, because one of them is from a very different world…)

The first is,

Daithí MacLasair (also called David Loranson)

Flame red hair and light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less.

He was always a bit of a tactician, able to plan far ahead and loving a puzzle. When his home kingdom fell in…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

So! Koshka and I are going to go ahead and do one. We’re borrowing a page from y’alls’ book and doing a school type one.

But it’s not just a school, it’s The Institution of Correctional Education, a boarding school primarily for the Construction of Good Citizens for their Excellency’s Realm.

*cue tenor…[Read more]

@ava-blue

but of course you can join!

@koshka

*weeps*

@godlyfantasy12

Aw, November is so precious.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Ahhh, Leon… and Riker and November and Mikkel. I’m enjoying this way too much. lol!

And for some reason this has taken longer than usual to write.

Viktor

Something was dreadfully wrong. Viktor watched in alarm as Leon slowly crumbled into himself. The man was leaning against the wall for support,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @koshka

All right, y’all…

I’ll get Alyona’s in after this one, hopefully.

Viktor

They were on their way now, a much larger group than before. Viktor walked near Riker and November, unwilling to be alone in the midst of strangers.

There aught to be a raven headed lass at his side, her eyes bright…[Read more]

@koshka @godlyfantasy12

Ahhhhh, I love it!

Look out, Sorren, that’s a King’s mariner and a couple marines. Bwahahaha!

@joy-caroline

I don’t really have much input to add, except that first, I agree with everything suggested, (I like the list format very much) and thank you so much for writing this for your book! I would absolutely want to know about all that before heading into it. Especially about the immorality, graphic content, and domestic abuse.

I didn’t…[Read more]

@starshiness

Thank you! I’m thrilled that you like it.

We definitely agree on his expression. My sweet, thinking laddie…

(Thank you again! I’m not really a great artist either, but I try. 😉 This is what I’m good at drawing, but horses? Oh no. XD I’d enjoy your comments anytime. And so glad you like his cloak! I like drawing clothing like…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Sorry, I had an RP written yesterday evening, but my phone died before I had it quite finished, and with it went my impetus to write another died too.

So, here I am, nearly a day late. XD

Oh, and Corvina is awesome; I’m so glad you redeem her.

I don’t know how characteristic this will be of…[Read more]