Elishavet Elroi

@freedomwriter76

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I love it. So. Much.

@freedomwriter76

O.O

That is crazy, and some great character development. Now I’m VERY glad you’re redeeming him!

You had better not hurt Adah in any way.

*Puts on glasses*

I mean, if it turns out for the best….

Okay, I can’t talk, considering my own character deaths.

Thanks! (I think. 😉 ) It is. I’m going to have to include a bunch of…[Read more]

@queen_of_alvastia I’d love to share!

@freedomwriter76

So, a little backstory? Because I love their backstory! Which you probably don’t want to hear all the backstory, because it’s a lot. XD I’ll try to condense.

Their mother and father, Edria and Amicai, were married when he was 21 and she was 19. He was a Shepherd of Eirtan, and very…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Ahhhhh.

Now I’m really worried, but excited too!!!! What’s her name? Can we know? Is she in hiding? Does she survive?! Why is it sad? WHAT HAPPENS?

And I’ve brought up Edria, here’s the collage I made for her.

@freedomwriter76

Hmmm. Most interesting. I’m glad you’re redeeming Erich. What about the others? What happens to Leonard? Now I’m intrigued/worried. Ach!

But this is a really good idea, putting character pictures together.

(And I love the family ones, such sweet little kiddos.)

So…

Here’s one for Alyona and her sister and mother. (I can’t…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

*Sniff*

Yes, I’m crying. Yes, I’m ok. Why am I crying?

Y’all, what’s about to happen is a shadow of a scene I’m planning with for my book.

Yeah, I can’t really explain.

*Sniffle*

Viktor

A strange ache beat inside Viktor’s heart. He missed his father, yes, but he was glad to have a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Oh, Judah…….

*Wails*

(Is secretly planning how to save him.)

(Even though I know his death is not only historically accurate, but right for the story….)

You’d better be glad you don’t kill Yosef. 😉

(By the way, Judah is another of my favorite names. Next you’ll name someone Reuben!)

@koshka

Please! Talk about him…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

I’d love to help, if I can.

Also, while I don’t mind if you have my email, (you may already. I honestly can’t remember.) I’d rather not share it publicly on here, (seems to be a trend…) so here’s my writing/secret alias email, if you want.

elleredeemed61312@gmail.com

Anyway, I hope the best for you and your tales. God bless!

@whalekeeper

I have, but only two, and one of them has changed in appearance since then, but I so, so want to do more!

I intend to try to draw one of my MCs, Viktor, next. If I am able to draw him, I’ll try to share it.

If you want to share any of your drawings, I’d love to see them.

@freedomwriter76

Oh.

That’s beautiful. And so ugly.

I wondered, because of his Yiddish name… I’m crying right now, inside.

Thanks.

*Takes a deep breath*

I want to hear his story!

@freedomwriter76

It’s adorable! Thanks for sharing.

Now I remember I never shared any of our Thanksgiving stories… Which get interesting, considering that every other year they include 22 people in a three bedroom, single bathroom, no dining room house.

Yeah, the adults encourage the kids to go play outside. Which we’re happy to do, since ou…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Thank you! Quickly puts on glasses.

Eagles are wonderful creatures. Viktor’s bird is named Esen, which I think means “heaven’s wind” or “wisdom” in Eishlagair. (I’m not sure on the translation.)

@keilah-h

That’s a good idea. That way, we can come back and do this again, but can change anything we need to.

So, for my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I do! 😎

Yeah, except they do need him to for e them to action…

But did I ever mention that later in the book, Viktor gets a GIANT eagle? (10 foot wingspan. Slate, ivory, and gold, a rare Mountain Guardian Eagle that actually belonged to the king.)

That eagle doesn’t like Ocran anymore than I do. XD

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

That’s right! Let’s not have any deaths, as of yet.

*Has secretly joined the #protectionsquad* 😉

(Although, If it weren’t for the fact that I need him for the story, I’d totally let them kill Ocran. But it’s all right, I have a very special fate reserved for him.)

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

November knelt beside him, and Viktor realized the other boy was trembling.

“Umm…” Viktor winced as November’s voice cracked. “A-Are you oh kay?”

Not the most logical question, but it made Riker smile, which was good. Viktor glanced at November to see the boy’s hand unconsciously steal up to je…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Viktor

The stair has been dark, crowded, filled with bloodthirst.

He had tried his best, but his best wasn’t much. And as even as he hated to admit it, everything he’d been taught in fighting had fled at the sight of the dogs.

Maybe if he’d been older, more weapon wise, he could have held the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

You guys have no idea how THRILLED, how SHISHCOMBOODLED I am about this. Seriously, I’ve never written either of my characters in these situations.

Alyona

Seven feet of young man rolled onto the roof. Alyona’s mind, still trapped in the rooms below them, struggled to comprehend what she was…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sounds good! I love it!

Yeah, that makes sense. I hoped it would help separate. Poor Nyx. And Arabella.

There are times I think she, Viktor, and/or Alyona could have a nice long talk…

And now Alyona is running to the roof… Or not. We’ll see.

If she didn’t, Viktor’s gonna be furious with worry.

I love him.