Elishavet Elroi

@joy-caroline

Oh, that is beautiful (although rather ugly too?). And very true.

It’s exactly what you said it was: sad and profound. For someone working in children’s ministry, it’s also very thought provoking. Thank you for sharing!

@godlyfantasy12

Yaayyy!

I’m loving November’s response. (To ‘brother’ on the awwwwwww side, and of course this is getting hilarious on the other side. XD)

*Does a double-check*

NOVEMBER’S LAST NAME IS ELROND????

Okay, I get that may or may not be his really real name, but I love it.

There must be a story there.

Ahhhhh!

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76  @keilah-h @koshka

(And Alyona would secretly be thrilled to join.)

Ahhhh, ready? Get set. Go!

Viktor

November was not fine, as neither was Riker, or Jayden for that matter. A thousand muttered questions echoed in the back of Viktor’s mind, like the many conversations around him, but he forced himself to push t…[Read more]

Alyona

It was astonishing how much Franz changed when his daughter there.

It was also astonishing how offense the term “child” was to at least two in the group. Alyona suspected that Vulkasin had practiced a rare bit of self control.

And had he really called her a lady? She pinched her lips together to try to stifle her sudden humor.

“Ah, a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76  @koshka

I’m thinking that after November wakes up, or around that time, I’ll bring in my crazy side character. He would probably not stay with the group, but rather get them moving along and provide amble opportunity for conversation/fluff. He’s a hilarious old meddler.

As for the questions, first off, Ocran…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h@koshka

Y’all, Y’ALL, Y’AAALLLLLL!!

I’m a little excited about how this is going.

So, there’s a scene much later in Heir of Ashes that has Viktor and *cough* Fritz stuck in a ravine, waiting for rescue because both boys are rather battered from a recent encounter with bitterness personified. And Fritz is…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

First off, I am furious about your WIP. I love those characters too much to see them turn villains!!!

Secondly, that’s awesome. I love the character development. It’s so brilliant!

Just don’t be mad if I kidnap your characters out of your AU. 😉

(Just kidding, of course. It really is awesome.)

@freedomwriter76

Yayyy!!!!!!!! I’m so glad!

And also, just to clear things up, the lines

This day is life come where only death has dwelled. Rise up servant, warrior reborn. Rise up child, son of the Highest King.

Were supposed to be in italics, because that’s the King speaking.

@joy-caroline @freedomwriter76 (RIKER!!!) @godlyfantasy12 (Thank you! It means a lot to know you find it so. 🙂 ) @koshka

So, I promised a while back that I’d share this scene, but I had a lot left undone in it at the time. Now, while it’s still extremely rough and subject to change depending on how the story falls out, it is complete.

So, here…[Read more]

@joy-caroline.  @koshka. @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy1

So, y’all, I need some thoughts on this scene in my rough draft. Does it make sense? Do I say too much or too little? It’s rough draft, so not my best writing, but I really need some thoughts on it.

(And I still need to plot and pray over Lennet, Alwin’s mother. I’m not quite sure about…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ahhh, I love all the scenes you shared!

(Even though I am a touch mad at the cliffhanger. 😉 )

November is so sweet and perfectly awkward. I sympathize very much. XD and Ara…. Oh Ara.

And yes, Riven is dooming himself to major rewards…. But definitely not the nice kind!

And I think Ganesh us becoming a favorite character…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka

Viktor

Viktor walked silently behind Leon and Riker, his mind swimming through the pain around him.

Leon was stumbling forward like he hadn’t eaten for weeks, apparently drunk with grief. (Not that he’s actually intoxicated. I just realized how literal that is in his story, but I wasn’t meaning…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76

@keilah-h @koshka

Y’ALL, I AM BACK!!!!

Okay, so due to a large spiral of events, I lost a bunch of stuff, including my password to KP. But since @kathleenramm and the KP staff are so awesome, I am back!!! (Thank you!!!)

I’m literaly soooo excited, and feel very blessed to be on here.

Now, I’ll try to get some…[Read more]

And last of all, my dear, darling. My favorite little shepherd boy, my…

OK, it’s obvious who this one belongs to.

Reúven Elroi (Robert Shepherds)

Dark headed and dark eyed, Reúven is not only from Eirda, he looks the part. He was torn away from his home and remaining family and sent to the Institutions like a hundred other boys. The sorrow o…[Read more]

AND THE THIRD ONE! (I’m having too much fun.)

This one is from our brain dump world, so it’s where we put all our creative overload before it spills into our WIPs and completely changes them. lol! Still, the more we get aquainted with this character, the more we like him.

Inglor Avelorion (Aka Ethan Llorel)

The only son of the WodeAlven in the…[Read more]

And next up, is…

Wilkins O’Laith (William Owens)

Gentle and quiet-spoken, he is an only son as the second born in a family of five children. He hails from the fens and wet-woodlands of the Tais, and struggles to learn the language here, finding it much less heartfelt than his mother-tongue. This is but his first year in the Institution.

His…[Read more]

There are four MCs, four POVs. (and I’m laughing, because one of them is from a very different world…)

The first is,

Daithí MacLasair (also called David Loranson)

Flame red hair and light hazel eyes that miss nothing and tell less.

He was always a bit of a tactician, able to plan far ahead and loving a puzzle. When his home kingdom fell in…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

So! Koshka and I are going to go ahead and do one. We’re borrowing a page from y’alls’ book and doing a school type one.

But it’s not just a school, it’s The Institution of Correctional Education, a boarding school primarily for the Construction of Good Citizens for their Excellency’s Realm.

*cue tenor…[Read more]