Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12

I was wondering!

@freedomwriter76 godlyfantasy

Sounds great to me! Reúven likes little girls, and Viktor would love to meet them both again.

@theloonyone

Oh, it’s fine, but thank you for redoing it!

Your WIP premise is so creative! And I totally get the “my book is running away from me” feeling! XD it’s happening to me currently.

Although, I do have one story that took a very romantic turn like that. Although, I don’t know if it’s exactly a “romance” because although that part is a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @godlyfantasy12

Viktor

Something wasn’t right; this was no pleasant coincidence. Viktor’s mind spun as he took in November’s shaken state.

It wasn’t something on the outside, something tangible. It was something else.

Thoughts.

Forebodings.

Memories.

“That…ah…that would be nice. Better then traveling alone, I suppo…[Read more]

@theloonyone

Greetings and welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!

I’m called Elishavet around here, and I mostly write realistic medieval fantasy, with a touch on the allegorical. (So fancy, I know. 😉 )

Your WorkInProgress sounds interesting! What is it about?

Also, short stories are awesome! I haven’t written many; in fact I think I’ve only written…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I love your characters! They are so wonderful!

As for Reúven?

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BWAHAHA! I just had to do that, sorry. XD but the answer is that I don’t know. He… He goes through a lot…

Do you remember the two characters I mentioned on the spoiler forum? Do you also remember that…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka

Okie dokie.

Reúven

Big blue eyes stared at them from under a mop of ginger hair. Then they focused in on Viktor.

“V-Viktor?”

This boy knew his brother?

“November!” Viktor’s face lit up. “Peace to you, brother. I’m so glad to see you again.”

The red head’s eyes widened a little more and he blin…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Wait, wait, wait.

WHAT!?

@godlyfantasy12

I love Grimm too!

And I love Grimm and Nyx together. They’re just so fun.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12

Ok, let’s go!

Viktor

Tall walls loomed above them, trapping them into a place that smelled too much like horses and people. Viktor scrunched his nose and cut a glance at the boy beside him.

Reúven relaxed against the wall, his arms crossed in a manner that was both comfortable, and that allowed him to…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ach, I know! But I’m really glad it makes you feel that way.

You do. 😉

Haha! Seriously though, I like the earlier medieval fashions for a reason! XD

William’s “hose” is the same thing.

Awwwwwww, I can totally imagine him like that and it’s soooo cute!

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12

And lastly, (for now)

William. Brown blonde hair and green eyes, he is tall and broad shouldered. And serious, very serious. Although, among friends he will open up more and maybe even laugh. It’s not that he’s stoic per se, just that he’s… William. Very loyal and protective of those he loves, it’s b…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yay! She might show up… I’m still not quite sure,since it really does change so e stuff with my timeline, but that the same time, I’m like: “ditch the timeline!” XD

As for my charries getting people… I literally have no idea. Just probably not my other characters. I really don’t know, though, so…

If I added Winifrith, I’d…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12

Next! (And sorry, I didn’t tag in the last two.)

Yes! Viktor is staying, and I also want to add…

Alwin. Has black hair that is cut fairly short, a rough ivory complexion, and thoughtful dark blue eyes. He is somewhat tall, but thin from lack of nourishment as much as from genetics.

Quiet but driven, h…[Read more]

Anyway, it’ll completely change where he is in his arc…

Or maybe I’ll just add her and ignore his arc, because… Well, spoilers.

Viktor. Not much different physically than before, except for being a bit more attuned to fighting, and a little older. On the inside, though, he’s changed… but he’s not sure in what ways.

(Haha, neither am I.)

BUT AN EXTREMELY IMPORTANT QUESTION: does he, or does he not have his eagle? I leave it to y’all.

Age just 15

And just so you know h…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @koshka  @godlyfantasy12

Okay, so I’ll try to introduce Reúven (Fritz) first…

Reúven. A laugh dances in his hazel eyes, but the set of his chin is determined. He has the soft calloused hands of a shepherd and the fleet feet of one. Which is a blessing, because he has given those feet to his lame father. What started in fe…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ahhhhh, I love them all. (But Paxton just about tore me up, the poor wee darling. Do you need someone to find him?) And LUNA!!!!!!!!

Yeah, she’s made her own special place in my heart. XD

And she’s really making me want to add in Winnifrith.

So, I think Alyona is not here this time, and Viktor and Reúven are on one of their…[Read more]

ALSO, I think y’all will get to meet…

REÚVEN ELROI!

Because I just realized how much I need to practice writing him…

But I think you’ll also get to meet…

Alwin and Willaim

So, at this time in the timeline, Alwin and William have been free for about three-four years. I think. It about one-two years. The question is, do you want Bible Co…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Awwwwwww, I love it!

And, YAYYYYYYYYYYY!

I DO!

@godlyfantasy12

The AU sounds really fun! XD Although honestly, the idea of an elf making coffee was rather funny….

Wait. Okay, now I’m seeing Inglor meeting Halt from Ranger’s Apprentice.

Inglor: What is this dark drink? It tastes rather bitter.

Halt: (under breath) That’s the taste of good coffee.

Will: Uh, add honey. Lots of ho…[Read more]