@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
Yay! It worked. I realize now that the last bit was a touch scrambled. It should read like this:
The little boy Laiba was carrying struggled to get down. The moment his feet touched the tent floor he trundled off to join his siblings. Laiba smiled faintly.
“They are precious.” Alyona whispered politely, her heart twisting inside her. The girl…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
And a bit from Book 2!
“Welcome, husband.” The woman by the fire stood up. She was beautiful in her own way. Her eyes were a honey gold and glowed with a quiet excitement. The hair that she brushed back under her hood was dark as night. Alyona thought she might be a few years younger than Clehan. A small child was perched on her hip, his head res…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
I am too suspicious about this connection to try to open another thread to do this… I think this is the right spot though.
@godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle @loopylin @anyone-who-wants
I have picked up writing in my WIP a bit more the past week, although it’s a bit out of chronological order. I just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
I made it! I’ve been trying to get on all day. Had it “opening” during work which was slow today.
But I have made it. *gasp for breath*
Koshka and I are working on homework, so we’ll be on and off… As much as Wyoh lets us in.
*glares at Wyoh*
Be nice! I wrote some scenes I want to share for critiques.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Neurodivergent/The Psychological Issues of Characters in the forum Characters 1 week, 3 days ago
Ok. I sympathize.
I do not have a stutter, but I get seriously caught on words and/or forget the word I was about to say right as it’s ready to leave my mouth. Then I’m awkwardly staring at the person I was talking to while doing mental gymnastics. Or I just repeat scrambled phrases until the right one comes out. It’s gotten worse the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Awesome sauce. Please do tell me how it works for you. I’ll take any info about these questions at this point. 🙂
(Completely understand. I’m ok with tech, but one moment of brilliant logic will be balanced with blankly staring at the screen wondering how a string of 1’s and 0’s could make something so confusing.)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
That’s the stuff, Hugo! Hot chocolate saves the day every time.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 5 days ago
Credit goes to Meadow Rose, an artist I like to find on line when I need a smile or art inspiration.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 5 days ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 5 days ago
In the sudden urge to share a meme or two, I checked my stash. Turns out much st of my memes are book references I saved from random sites.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 week, 5 days ago
I love these. I love these so much. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Yes. Absolutely. I am having so much fun being the author of an author who is not an author anymore and thus has no veto or reliable foretelling powers. XD It’s splendid.
Also insanely relatable.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 5 days ago
Kyler’s board is lovely, in a rough around the edges – this character is probably dangerous way. He looks like a sympathetic character. I wonder who the girl is… 😢
I also totally get how hard it is to capture all the facets of a personality and story into one aesthetic. I have yet to achieve it. XD
Ooooooo….…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 week, 5 days ago
First off, I’d love to hear about the retelling!
Secondly, I love this story idea you’re working on. It sounds like a fabulous mix of new plot ideas and classic tropes.
Thirdly, my tags haven’t been working for a few months, so I’m sorry if I don’t respond to something…
Though, I was so happy to open this thread just now and see all…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi started the topic Scrivener Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Hey fellow KeePers!
I’ve been thinking about getting Scrivener software to work with. I’ve been working with Google docs, but for a variety of reasons, (including filling on One Drive with random world building notes and WIPs) I am looking for something else. I’ve heard great things about Scrivener, including its user friendly approach, small…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Yay! Glad y’all like it! The next chapter is coming, bit by bit. We’ve actually been looking forward to it for months. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Viktor
“Are you ok?” Viktor gave a nervous glance back toward the group they had passed. If he hadn’t been so distracted by the posters on the bulletin board, he might have realized Hugo had been detained.
But Hugo just nodded and said something about unnatural impulses. They were entering another crowd of students…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Oh, it’s ok! I just wanted to know where we were. We’re going to a class… Was it math?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
@anyonewholikesreadingaboutlittlekids
As some of you might have noticed, this is the computer that doesn’t add accent marks. XD
Nadian
It was pretty outside. Nadian pressed her nose against the window pane. For a moment, the black irises in the bed below the window were crystal clear. Then she exhaled, and the glass fogged up. It was funny. She…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Is Hugo still with Lois and Viktor?
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