@elishavet-pidyon
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oof, that’s ok. 🙂 Hope you feel better soon!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
I’m so glad you liked it!
Yeah, it’s standalone right now, but who knows? 😉 I haven’t gotten to work seriously in much of my WIPs, so they’re more like Works Waiting For Progress or something like that.
A sub-series is a good idea! I shall await your return. =D And maybe get some of my homework done. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
My stories? Yes. This short story is a stand alone, but I have three WIPs. Currently, my goal is to finish a novela by Easter. It’s one I haven’t shared much about, but is pretty close to my heart. Plus it’s a better springboard than a 3 volume epic or a 5 book series. XD
You?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
*Squeals*
Yay! Like I said, it’s such an intricately pieced world.
Yeah, most of mine are in my head too.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Exactly! =)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oh, I liked your story. The worldbuilding and premise was so unique! And the frame story layout was a good touch. Does it belong to a larger story?
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Very true. It’s so much fun. XD I would add that we hope if we can connect to a reader’s heart, we can impact them in the long run.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Aw, thanks! (Why is it so fulfilling to hear your writing made someone cry? XD)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oh, interesting! I love the Celtic folklore inspiration. Fairies are so creepy. XD It’s a fascinating premise.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Here it is in all it’s ESL by a native English speaker glory.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v4ZJMMpmLEv0rVVsb7mpQG6OI0Xt1XpeWYZU5_934nc/edit?usp=drivesdk
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Yay! I’ll run over mine to get some edits my siblings suggested done and send it in after that.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
lol. Thanks. I should read the entirety of a post thread before joining in. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 2 days ago
@whaley
This sounds fun! I’ve wanted to do a short story contest for a while.
By the by, just to clarify, is it 500 words minimum, or maximum? Also, does it need to be a new story?
@koshka But it’s my darling Language and Diction Experiment. 0.O (But great idea. I might jump off onto my other more scar-central stories though.)
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Elishavet Elroi posted a new activity comment 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Yeah, life can be rough sometimes. This year has felt like Micah 7:8 in more ways than one. XD I think this poem was kinda trauma processing for an accident I had a few months back. Glad you like it!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
These are from a WIP Rules of the Road. I’d give more context, but I think they speak for themselves. XD
My heart literally froze.
It was a tamale
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I filled out another sentence diagram. So far, the Cat (subject) had(helping verb) eaten(verb) the (article describing direct object) mouse (direct object).
A striking saga of n…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi changed their profile picture 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle and Elishavet Elroi are now friends 1 month ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
Animation? I’m intrigued. That’s so (hates to use the word “cool” like this but brain is jelly.) cool!
Those hands are pretty good. They’re reminding me of the exercises my therapist wants me to do. O.O
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 1 week ago
Why do you guys do this to me?!
Lol, just kidding.
Beautiful! I love seeing your work. And your digital skill is much better than mine. I… Don’t do digital art yet. XD
Also, that first picture of Leon and Adelheide is so sweet. I about cried.
Your pictures look so good! I also have a lot of questions…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Yes, he is blind. Don’t worry, you didn’t miss any dramatic scenes. 😉 If you read back, you can see we insinuated his blindness earlier. For instance, the conversation between Onnendel and Dwogin about the sunset.
It’s part of his backstory. We’ll explain the it more in a couple chapters. (Hint: Shadow Dread is an illness…[Read more]
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Oh, that’s a good bible verse. Sorry to hear about your accident! Are you ok now?
Eeek, I forgot the phone died before I sent in my response. Now it’s very late, but anyhoo,
I’m doing well. Basically, I met concrete and it was not polite. Thank the Lord, the only real injury was a broken bone in my hand. It’s almost normal now. 🙂