Elfwing

@whalekeeper @loopylin ugh that happens…..

wings of fire book 13 blahhhh

(Seriously though, the rest of series was good, and thought there was a bit of that stuff in the previous books so I really shoulda seen it coming, it was mostly in the form of jokes so I didn’t take it seriously)

So when I recommend the series, because it’s still…[Read more]

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 Inappropriate stuff?

Nothing I’ve seen that’s really bad. Worldbuilding wise, some things they say can get weird if you look too close at it……For example someone mentions “star and planetary alignments” in one sentence, but tbh that’s been so overused in so many fantasy stories, I shrugged it off, not really…[Read more]

@evelyn-collins cool! I can’t wait to see what you come up with….

also I’m from Florida, but I can’t tell u specifically where lol

@esther-c sorry it’s been so long since my RP! I never saw yours so kept waiting XD

Paxton

Paxton looked on a bit confused at the exchange between the two boys but also curious. He giggled a bit as Lukas stepped toward him, ears still tinted pink, sighing in exasperation.

He blushed a bit more at Paxton’s giggle, giving him an incredulous look.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

@every-one else who commented on here gave such good advice as I’ve struggled with this myself!

I don’t know if it helps but in one WIP I had to set aside for the time being (it was too complex, needed to take a step back to reorganize later), my God-figure was included like you demonstrate, but was treated more as an enigma or…[Read more]

@evelyn-collins kinda random, but are you planning to have the other members of the Bad Batch show up anywhere? Like either in flashbacks or as part of Leo and Rylan’s journey? And will they have children of their own? (Obviously Omega won’t lol, and I feel like that’s not Echo’s thing either)

(Oh, and a little tip–usually when I write…[Read more]

@rae

Tech

Sir Tech?

He’d had a lot of nicknames before, but never once had he been called “Sir.”

He focused his attention on the figure standing before him, his eyelights dimming so as not to blind the young human. “So you are Alpha? Ru has said several good things about you.”

The knife in Alpha’s hand reminded him of Hunter’s, or maybe the…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin ok then!

@whalekeeper squawking random noises at random times?

eh…I do that all the time XD

@savannah_grace2009 Same!! The books aren’t the greatest I’ve ever read, but I love some of the worldbuilding.

oh btw, book 9 is when she finally makes her choice, if you don’t mind the spoilers. I won’t tell you who she chooses though.

@kyronthearcanin cool, I’d love to see it–but probably on another topic and not here lol.

@loopylin haha I noticed that most of us writers are girls too.

@rae that’s a cool little crab thing!

@beth-torres I believe it’s your turn to RP.

@kyronthearcanin That’s great!! I remember when you were just starting the first book. I’d love to see a snippet from the finished product sometime!

(Not today, though, unfortunately. I have to get off after this so I won’t see it until tomorrow or so)

@kyronthearcanin cool!

How are you doing on that story by the way?

@rae It’s your turn to write an RP. No pressure, I just like RP’ing as Tech lol

@kyronthearcanin ooh nice profile pic!!

@thearcaneaxiom ooh I like the birds idea for some reason lol

@evelyn-collins I’ve heard that, and yes, that theory certainly fits him.

I personally think it might, and if it doesn’t, I think just having her with the habit but not know where it came from is a great idea lol

I unfortunately don’t have time to talk today but I hopefully will be on tomorrow!

@grcr you’re welcome!