Elanor

Maybe ask the general forum that question? They’d probably have tips on that. Sorry, I’m not that experienced of a writer.

IDK. Maybe add more of the expressions on their faces?  The dialogues don’t sound like the way someone would speak in real life.

@ariel-f

Hi Arial! I’m Lilly. I’m also a Christian and homeschooled. I’m also new on here.

The book you’re writing sounds really cool! I find futuristic books and movies very intriguing. I personally haven’t seen any Star Wars, though I know many people who have.

Ooo, for King & Country are one of my favorite CM artists as well! (Along with…[Read more]

Sounds interesting. Keep up the writing! 🙂

@iluvhim18 Sorry Evilyn, I initially sent the first one to the wrong address. 😆

@anika123  Hi!

I’ve read what you have so far and I am greatly enjoying it. I think that the plot is a really good one and am wanting to read more!

My critiques would be that the way it is written is a little choppy to read. It’s sort of halting making the dial…[Read more]

@iluvhim18

Hi!

I’ve read what you have so far and I am greatly enjoying it. I think that the plot is a really good one and am wanting to read more!

My critiques would be that the way it is written is a little choppy to read. It’s sort of halting making the dialogues not flow very well. There are also some spelling mistakes throughout.

There’s…[Read more]

@iluvhim18
Cool!
What’s it about?

Cool!
What’s it about?

@iluvhim18

Are you writing anything currently?

@kathleenramm

So do you have a WIP going on write now?

@iluvhim18

So I suppose I’m an introverted, observant, feeling, judging, and assertive Defender.

So it would seem we’re pretty opposite in personality 😆

@iluvhim18

Okay. Thanks lol. I thought it rang a bell but wasn’t sure why. xD I did one of those a few years ago I don’t remember exactly what it was but I think it said I am a “Defender”.

Oh, yup I am. Defender: ISFJ-A

@iluvhim18

Hi Evelyn.
Thanks for the welcome. What’s a ENFP?

See you around. 🙂

@devestate-lasting

Cool. I’ve been writing off and on for the last 3-4 years.

@devastate-lasting  Cool! How long have you been writing?

I enjoy reading books that I can’t predict from reading the first chapter what will happen from start to finish.

@kathleenramm

Hi Kathleen.

World building I’d say comes easier to me. I think that comes with my photographic way of thinking (when I’m thinking, hearing, or reading something I am seeing it vividly in my head almost like a video without the sound). I started to make my own language but gave up because it’s harder when you have no one to speak…[Read more]

@lydia-s

Hi Lydia.
Thanks for the welcome.

My profile pic is a picture of a horse my family used to have. She was sooo pretty.

My top three favourite authors would be… JRR Tolkien, Lois Walfrid Johnson, and Lisa T. Bergren.

My favourite mythical animal would be… Griffins.

And my favourite character… Oooo that question is hard. Because…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Thanks. I think so if I do say so myself xD.

What are your hobbies? What do you write?