Snapper

General impressions: I really liked it, and find the premise/laws of fate to be very intriguing.
Some things I would expect or be interested in seeing moving forward:
– Juqing and Wanyu meeting
– The relationship between Wanyu and her father or Wanyu and her teacher/his family and the other students (how do they react to finding out she’s…[Read more]

General impressions: I really liked it, and find the premise/laws of fate to be very intriguing.
Some things I would expect or be interested in seeing moving forward:
– Juqing and Wanyu meeting
– The relationship between Wanyu and her father or Wanyu and her teacher/his family and the other students (how do they react to finding out she’s…[Read more]

@alia Are you still here?

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

anyone on? I’m on early because my mom is on the math computer, and so I don’t have anything to do.

@sarah-anson I know what it’s like to have a MC that just. Won’t. Be. Compelling!!! *tears out hair* The MC of my story that is currently on hold was like that. She had a backstory I loved, she was quirky, realistic, and had a story goal. But what I found was holding her back from being interesting (or even likeable) was that she was kind of in…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.  🙂

@skredder Awesome 🙂

@ingridrd *tries not to break critiquing hiatus*

*fails*

I just have to read this!!! Maybe I’ll put off the start of my hiatus until late May… is the whole book written and you’re just posting parts of it here and there, or are you still in the process of writing it?

To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Heyo! Here’s part 12. It’s shorter than the other parts.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P1xxxCXLFZG_M70KCAVB7WxJ_kZQdHtqojQrZIbPNmk/edit?usp=sharing

Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

And here are the pics…

So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]

@catwing  I’m still developing her superpower but she can camouflage herself to blend in with anything.  🙂

@rochellaine

Oh, yes, I did find a cupcake. It was really nice too. 😛

@rochellaine

Okay good night (or good morning really!)

I’m just going to leave it for now, I have plenty of other editing to do, I’ll work something out sooner or later.

@seekjustice Sorry! 🙂  (But I’ve left suddenly in the past.  Especially when it gets really late.  If I leave suddenly it’s usually because I just crash and fall asleep. 😛 )

Oh yes.  That will make you feel better!  …did you find a cupcake?

Sorry, but I still haven’t thought of anything.  I’m going to leave completely now, I think.  But I’…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Ah no, I hadn’t got that post. That explains everything 🙂

No, I have no solutions. It’s driving me crazy. I’m going to see if I can find a cupcake, because I’m sure that will make me feel better.

@seekjustice I don’t know if you got my post saying I was leaving, but I’m back now for a very little bit.

Oh yes, now I remember.  That wouldn’t be as easy a fix as some edits, but I don’t think it would be too hard to make it a semi-accident.

Shakespeare said “love is blind, and lovers cannot see/the pretty follies that themselves commit.”  E…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I had been right. There was the sniper, only two meters away. I opened my mouth, let out an almighty scream and then put my hand over the muzzle of the rifle.

She purposefully puts her hand over the gun. I guess she could get shot accidentally though.

The other thing is: why was she there in the first place? Delivering a letter to…[Read more]