Lin

@loopylin

Also, idk if you already know this tip, but when outlining with a pen, often leaving your sketch lines and not erasing them makes the drawing seem less flat.

@loopylin

Do you have access to a scannercor printer? When I have a beautiful drawing I want to ink, I will sometimes scan it, then print it off. If you have a computer, you can just save it by drive or send it by email or right click on the image here and push “save image as…” Then right click the image in folders on the computer and push…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Also, what is the end goal of your plot? Reuniting the galaxy and reversing what Grathmere did while working with him? I recommend making Grathmere somewhat morally relatable (think Edmund Dantes from The Count of Monte Cristo)

I honestly have never thought about it. I think the most good Grathmere can do is to destroy his allies…[Read more]

Sorry had some trouble andd it posted for some reason. @scoutfinch180 the rest.

After GA, the Wondians did mix some of their blood with aliens from other planets, but there are still

Those of pure Wondian blood. For instance, most the Dwarves are pure since don’t often accept others into their small circles.

For the sake of sci-fi and stories,…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

OH ok, I read Alin as Aelynn, sounding more like a girl’s name in my head. Also, What Alin says there does sound a little feminine in a way,

XD I’m sorry, but it’s just funny to me, cuz that is how Alin’s name is pronounced! In fact Nahim’s oldest brother, Knihan, had to have the spelling of his named changed because “Nihan” is a g…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Glad you enjoyed it!

Nar

“A lot. Both my parents are fond of music, and my older brother plays drums when he feels the mood. I like to dance personally, especially duos. Realn-style duos are the prettiest dances you will ever see. Triplets are complicated. Most dances are upbeat and quick, some so much so only the most flexible and…[Read more]

ack! I don’t feel like redoing that rp from before, I’ll just ignore it’s poor quality.

@jonas @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009

Nae

Nae saw Riker’s eye widen, either in fear or surprise. She grasped his hand tighter, hugging her body to his leg. Not out of fear, but for support. After a few seconds, she stepped away from Riker, and planted her feet apart with determination. Looking up at the older man with her innocent blue…[Read more]

@jonas

Ouch. Yeah, I can relate.

@jonas

I think my character Alpha would defeat the current dark lord and become the one darkening just so he knew why it happens! Idk why I’m telling you this, he just popped into my head and told me what he would do XD

Have you found out what darkens the chosen ones?

@whalekeeper

Nar

“It would be a blessing.” She left the last piece out of her translation, Your smile is one. “Officially, I am called a Young Warrioress by my people, some call me an empressling. It may sound odd to you, but to me, ‘miss’ sounds odd too.”

@keilah-h

@whoever-made-up-Wyoh

your ghost is eating my ideas

@savannah_grace2009 Another victim of our Wyoh!

Don’t worry, you’re not alone, she’s been eating my notifs before I see them, eating Freedom’s posts and cursing Sara to spell tags wrong! 😆

She’s been very busy lately.

@scoufinch180

I’m finally replying.

 How did Nahim get here after fainting in the middle of a hostile environment?]

That is revealed later on in the book. While Nahim thought that it was impossible, someone did come into the grasslandsxand found him. Not Mandin though.

    I’m guessing the stone (may I suggest the Opal, heart, or Eye of the…

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@whalekeeper

Nar

“Nar? I would love to go to the dance with you.” Nar burst in another smile, but before she could answer, he held a finger to his mouth. “But we don’t know each other too well. So I’d also love to buy you some treats before we ride the bus back, and hang out. So you can decide. Is that okay?”

“Yeh! I’d love too! Ih cum len fl…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Lol! What do you think I am?

@whalekeeper

Nar

“I don’t live with my birth family, I lived with a clan of crazy people until I was fourteen, and escaped with my adopted brother, who is one of said crazy people. Now I fend for myself, in the cold, dark world of darkness.” Hugo laughed. “I have to look scary. That’s actually my job.” Nar blew a strand of hair from over her…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

That is very helpful, thank you.

My latest idea for Returns has a similar theme as Nahim’s stories, where Alpha must forgive and reconcile with his father, or Grathmere will die. Kinda like if Luke was the one with hatred and trying to kill Vader, but Vader is still the bad guy. And then Luke forgives him and a happy ending w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nar

“So what kind of amazing things can you tell me about yourself?” Nar smiled, then laughed again as she often did.

“I’m a geek about doctoring, I know a little bit about machinery from an older brother. I…can fight, but only do it for protection. I like the color…” Pink rose in her cheeks. “Amber more than anything. I’m one…[Read more]

@rae

I cringe at you’re writing of the last rp, it really doesn’t sound like your style.

 
@criticizingrae
 
Yeah…apparently my brain was dead.
@rae

You should rewrite it.

 
@criticizingrae
Yeah, I think I shall. But probably not rn.
 
@everyone ignore my last rp.