Denali Christianson

@everyone whoa tons of responses too many ppl to tag 🤣 thanks everyone who loves Ara and November!! AKA Aravember or Novella!!

@esther-c LUKE SKYWALKER?!?! BEST SHIP NAME EVER!!!!

(tho I do luv Novella….XD)

Also @elishavet-pidyon I read that part about Reúven and no joke my face went from 😁 to 😳 in like one second

I’m glad u chan…[Read more]

@arien

using someone underneath the uncle’s command, who isn’t supposed to be giving corporal punishments like whipping, but is anyway, under the guise of it being “The Uncle’s Orders” still points all blame back to the uncle, when I reality it’s not. This accomplishes both goals of having Aeden angry at his uncle, enough to eventually…[Read more]

@wilder-w

So I was randomly looking at old posts, and AHH!!! Another animal writer!

Great job showing the emotion! I must admit that as much as I like the end, I want more of these characters, a lot more. But that’s what short stories do; they give one taste of an amazing world, then leave you satisfied but hoping for more.

Anyway, good to see…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

(Oops, I intended to respond earlier, but…)

Ara and November are great together, from what I’ve read of the first draft scenes you posted. (November’s father makes my blood boil, but that’s beside the point)

I don’t exactly have any romance plots in my book yet, but I do know which characters get married (if that makes sense).…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @felicity @esther-c

SPEAKING OF ROMANTIC SUBPLOTS/PLOTS

i literally can’t make this post without mentioning my main subplot (that actually could be a full plot since it’s really important to the actual plot too and one of the MCs Charrie arcs 😂)

And that is….

ARA AND NOVEM…[Read more]

Also the snake and frog thing is HILARIOUS! I’m now imagining Tauren and Lesli sitting behind a bush watching a snake all wide eyed 😂

@mineralizedwritings yes it’s like Kaine with Everly, but Ik sometimes it can be viewed as strange because it’s an animal, but to me he’s just like if he were a person.

and I’m still trying to decide on a certain ability his species may or may not have that….well…might explain some of that.

let me just say it’s very similar to sh…

@mineralizedwritings ya my series doesn’t have any love triangles XD I mean in the second book one readers might think there’s one but it’s just…yea whatever you’d have to read it 😂

@mineralizedwritings also!!! I’m so happy u like my charries!!

I don’t want it to be weird but I really love their relationship and think it’s super sweet. I know a lot of people and the world can twist things into just weird stuff and everything but idk I just find it real sweet and I like it and think it’s fine and innocent and just so sweet h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings 🤣 sounds hilarious! Poor Layson but he sounds like the kinda funny guy I’d LOVE! Also he’s taking care of a little toddler? Yes please!!! Already love him! And Kaine!

Also, Grimm is the MC that is introduced in book 3, and they meet him while traveling after leaving Cirque (Lyn and Nyx’s home.)

He’s been through…[Read more]

@moneralizedwritings also the Practice makes perfect sounds hilarious 🤣 not sure why he’d be crying but maybe make it a comedic crying cuz imagining him mortified after that is hilarious 🤣

@mineralizedwritings

Of course! And yes I got it right, tho in the actual series (u may be thinking of the AUs) Grimm and Lyn’s relationship grows overtime.

So they aren’t obviously blood siblings, but Nyx was given to Jocelyn as a kit, the only one discovered of his kind by a man named Lander (who secretly has a large impact on Lyn’s life…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Okay, gotcha didn’t realize it was a comic but that’s super cool!

So with that awkward scene…I think if you make it a comedic scene since it’s a comic it would work out a bit better, and then perhaps later have Everly realize “Ah wait a minute this guys actually different then what I originally thought” meanwhile Layson’s on…[Read more]

Also, how old is Layson and Everly?

do they get married in this book? If not, then u can play with time and leave the readers with their own thoughts on what happens after the story “ends.”

In truth, showing their relationship developing isn’t all that hard. It’s mainly a point of not rushing them into things, just as we wouldn’t want to h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

hmm…

Are Layson and Everly pov characters?

@felicity ah yes. You cannot flirt to convert, something my father and grandfather (also the pastor and bishop of our church) preaches.

Again, plz share ur specific issues with ur subplots, etc so we can help u out as best we can!

@mineralizedwritings I just responded to it lol!!

Ill probs talk about him in that

@felicity imo, I wouldn’t trade Christian value for historical accuracy.

The way I see it, people won’t notice if language isn’t there, but they will notice if it is.

make sense?