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Lin replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Awesome! Good luck with the rest of it!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Y’all are awesome at this!! Also, Grace, LOVE your tag! ROFL!!!
So this is my new synopsis! What do ya think? I like it better.
All Arabella wants is to stay with her family, but destiny has other plans…..
November just wants to protect her, though he questions if he can.
Jocelyn’s only wish is to follow in her uncle’s foots…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Into His Marvelous Light in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
don’t worry about it girl!! Awesome job and I figured yall would just come in and answer as u saw it.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic WIP Chat! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@joy-caroline @kathleenramm @gracie-j @devastate-lasting @issawriter7 @abigail-m @everyone-else
so long story short I realized a while ago that my “first” draft was actually a zero draft, making this draft my first which works waaaay better.
that being said, yesterday I finished act 1 in my first draft!!! AHHHH so so glad cuz I struggle wit…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Into His Marvelous Light in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@joy-caroline @mkfairygirl @lydia-s @abigail-m
Hi y’all! Ready for the first lesson?
So, before we begin, why don’t you take a few minutes to pray.
Now, I use the KJV Translation of the Bible. It is the most accurate of all English-translated bibles and I highly highly suggest you use this version. I will post the verses on here and you can…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@sami-eastwood That synopsis sounds awesome! I would love to read a book about that!
Disaster movies are certainly unique. I don’t usually go to watch them but I have watched several. And those are an awesome choice of books!
Ah, I’ve heard of ranch dressing on pizza, though I have yet to try it! I will have to, though!
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Lin replied to the topic Keep going or jump ahead? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@nanisnook I usually end up procrastinating for a week and regretting it, but yeah I usually push on through instead of skipping around.
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Keep going or jump ahead? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Well, most of the time I just push right through it, but if a scene’s coming up and I don’t know what’s gonna happen AND I just don’t feel like writing it, I’ll just put: something really cool happens and move on. I’ve only ever done that once, tho, so it’s no a super common thing for me. 😉
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Lin replied to the topic Hallo! *waves* in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@faith-q Hi there! Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m Linyang, though most folks here just call me Lin. Pleasure to make your acquaintance!
That is a lot of siblings! It must be a fun family!
Those are a lot of languages! I’m currently trying to learn Japanese when I can.
What are some of your favorite books or movies?
What are some of your favorite…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j Thank you so much! I love yours as well!
@joy-caroline Yours is beautiful!
@issawriter7 Thank you so much!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@devastate-lasting @gracie-j Aww, THANK Y’ALL BOTH SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! <333 I LOOVE both of y’all’s, too!!!!! Soooo AMAZING and it just makes me wanna read the stories sooo badly!!!!
(Grace, now you’re just making me want to get back to reading Held Captive soooo badly. 😉 )
(Also, Linyang, I am now dubbing you the queen of amazing taglines!!!!…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Oh wow, I love yours! Especially that last tagline! Thank you for starting this topic!
@issawriter7 Girl, I love yours as well! And I love your second tagline!
*rubs hands* Time to make up things on the spot…oh wait, here’s a thing I had from months ago…
You know what? This would be fun for some of my already completed…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Hmmm… I think a mix of both sounds really cool!!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Awwww, girl, THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!! I’m soo glad to hear that!!! 😊 Girl, you are SO very welcome!!!! <33
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I’m trying to decide if I want to make a big full synopsis, or desperate ones for the characters or kinda a mix of both
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@issawriter7 oooh!!!! I love that last tag line and great synopsis!!! And thank you so so much!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
WHOA, girl, THAT SYNOPSIS JUST SOUNDS SOOOO AMAZING AND INTRIGUING!!!!!! Like if this book was in a bookstore, I would TOTALLY buy it and read it!!!! If you want, maybe you could give a little more of an idea who the villain is and what the main conflict of the story’s gonna be. But either way, I still ADORE it soooooo much!!!!!…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Hiya!!
So I wanted to get y’all’s opinions on some of my synopsis and tag line and see if y’all had any critiques or even ideas I could use to make some more! This is for my current WIP, Destiny’s Murder.
Also, I really wanna read y’all’s synopses and tag line if you don’t mind sharing!
tags!!
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Lin replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 years, 3 months ago
@morgan If it fixes your plot holes, I’d say go for it!
I think that adding another sibling could help strengthen your theme, as others have said before, you could probably work around with fleshing some of your characters out. And if you’re writing a sequel, I think that if there is a problem that arises in this book then it could be resolved in…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@relia Ah, I’ve been meaning to check out Les Miserables! It’s so long though….ah….
Ah yes, LOTR. And I’ve read the Hunger Games trilogy a long time ago. And yes, Star Wars is quite excellent. The new ones are…not. Who are your favorite characters from these?
Le gasp. Heresy? Oh word…
Oh, I’ll have to check out that movie! It sounds…[Read more]
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