Denali Christianson

@mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @felicity @esther-c

SPEAKING OF ROMANTIC SUBPLOTS/PLOTS

i literally can’t make this post without mentioning my main subplot (that actually could be a full plot since it’s really important to the actual plot too and one of the MCs Charrie arcs 😂)

And that is….

ARA AND NOVEM…[Read more]

Also the snake and frog thing is HILARIOUS! I’m now imagining Tauren and Lesli sitting behind a bush watching a snake all wide eyed 😂

@mineralizedwritings yes it’s like Kaine with Everly, but Ik sometimes it can be viewed as strange because it’s an animal, but to me he’s just like if he were a person.

and I’m still trying to decide on a certain ability his species may or may not have that….well…might explain some of that.

let me just say it’s very similar to sh…

@mineralizedwritings ya my series doesn’t have any love triangles XD I mean in the second book one readers might think there’s one but it’s just…yea whatever you’d have to read it 😂

@mineralizedwritings also!!! I’m so happy u like my charries!!

I don’t want it to be weird but I really love their relationship and think it’s super sweet. I know a lot of people and the world can twist things into just weird stuff and everything but idk I just find it real sweet and I like it and think it’s fine and innocent and just so sweet h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings 🤣 sounds hilarious! Poor Layson but he sounds like the kinda funny guy I’d LOVE! Also he’s taking care of a little toddler? Yes please!!! Already love him! And Kaine!

Also, Grimm is the MC that is introduced in book 3, and they meet him while traveling after leaving Cirque (Lyn and Nyx’s home.)

He’s been through…[Read more]

@moneralizedwritings also the Practice makes perfect sounds hilarious 🤣 not sure why he’d be crying but maybe make it a comedic crying cuz imagining him mortified after that is hilarious 🤣

@mineralizedwritings

Of course! And yes I got it right, tho in the actual series (u may be thinking of the AUs) Grimm and Lyn’s relationship grows overtime.

So they aren’t obviously blood siblings, but Nyx was given to Jocelyn as a kit, the only one discovered of his kind by a man named Lander (who secretly has a large impact on Lyn’s life…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Okay, gotcha didn’t realize it was a comic but that’s super cool!

So with that awkward scene…I think if you make it a comedic scene since it’s a comic it would work out a bit better, and then perhaps later have Everly realize “Ah wait a minute this guys actually different then what I originally thought” meanwhile Layson’s on…[Read more]

Also, how old is Layson and Everly?

do they get married in this book? If not, then u can play with time and leave the readers with their own thoughts on what happens after the story “ends.”

In truth, showing their relationship developing isn’t all that hard. It’s mainly a point of not rushing them into things, just as we wouldn’t want to h…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

hmm…

Are Layson and Everly pov characters?

@felicity ah yes. You cannot flirt to convert, something my father and grandfather (also the pastor and bishop of our church) preaches.

Again, plz share ur specific issues with ur subplots, etc so we can help u out as best we can!

@mineralizedwritings I just responded to it lol!!

Ill probs talk about him in that

@felicity imo, I wouldn’t trade Christian value for historical accuracy.

The way I see it, people won’t notice if language isn’t there, but they will notice if it is.

make sense?

@mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper

Ahh….romance *sighs dreamily and falls onto a large bed XD*

How about we make a forum topic for romance subplots? If y’all want to?

As for Paxton….

IKR?! Quite honestly idk. I just have a thing for adorable little boys and had to have one in my series. Plus it does make the things he go thru…a lot wor…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings XD XD so that begs me to ask…

Have u met my Charrie Arthur? Lol he’s a Charrie from the second series idea I’ve got. He’s kinda like Shawn

@esther-c AHHH THANK U FOR DOING LUKAS! *hugs baby tight* THE BABY!!! I love him XD

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But…those are beeeeeest XD XD XD jk I getcha, but I think he’s sincere, he kinda showed that side of himself in the one part of this scene. It’s moments like those where ur kike “ahh he does have that side to him”

now if a character never did that it would be a bit different….